YAY! Well done; very well done. :D
Author's Response: Lol - thank you! Glad you enjoyed ^_^
| Title: Epilogue
| 31 Jul 2009 7:49 am
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| Reviewer: nameless (Anonymous)
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dude, that was the best, no doubt, fanfiction I have EVER read. Seriously. I swear i've never cried so much during a series this much, especially the second form last chapter. You are a genius of writing. And the fruit salad spell was genius, nice imagination to brightmagic. I've never given even one fanfiction a rating of ten, and you completely earned it. I love how you kept every character, for lack of a better phrase, in their character, and the plot was amazing. Did you simply improvise, or actually think out the entire series before writing it? 'Cause the way everything fit together was perfect. I also like how Severus wasn't just used as an "irritating" character like many writer use him as, that was awesome. All in all, a perfect story. ^_
Author's Response: Wow! I'm thrilled that you think so and that you enjoyed it so much! I shall let Mila know what you think of her fruit salad invention ^_^ I think I did a bit of both - made a rough plan and then improvised if it sounded right (there were points during the month I'd been assigned to finish it in when I wondered if I ever would!) Thanks again for your wonderful review!
Just stumbled across this; it is absolutely wonderful! Funny and heartbreaking and the same time, A+!
Author's Response: Thank you! Stumbling across good stories is one of my favourite things to do, so I'm glad you enjoyed mine :)
wooooowwww!!!! I absolutely loved this story! It had me hooked from the very beginning to the last word. While I was reading the last two chapters I happened to be listening to my personal Mixer on my IPod on shuffle. It just happened to correspond perfectly with the parts I was reading at the time...This combined with the emotional parts actually brought tears to my eyes! You KNOW a story is great when that happens!
Thank you so much, this story is definitely in my top 5 FanFictions ever! (Not just HP, either.) Congrats, and keep writing!
ForEll
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you - it's wonderful to hear that you enjoyed my story so much!
| Title: Epilogue
| 15 Jun 2009 3:05 am
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| Reviewer: kitten (Anonymous)
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wow this was a really good story! Very well written, in my perspective. Good job!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much - I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This was an AMAZING story!!! I'm adding it to my favourites. Poor Snape though - I felt so sorry for him. Hope Harry can give him acceptance! The maurauders were brilliant. And Lily and little Sev were good. I especially liked the part with Sev telling Harry to dump the cake on Snape. And Snape's fallout from his statement about them dying was really well thought out. Well done! x
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm sure Harry can find it in himself to forgive and accept - it's what he's good at, after all. The Marauders were fun to write, along with the rest of the past generation (and I just couldn't resist adding the cake bit in :D) I'm glad you enjoyed it - and thank you again.
Very intriguing beginning, can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
Great job. I like how Snape and Harry's relationship evolved, but by the end of the story, it wasn't perfect. I enjoyed the story muchly.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the imperfection left there - I felt it was needed for a more canon-take on the characters. Wonderful to hear that you enjoyed it! Thank you for all of your lovely reviews!
Wow. I liked that chapter. Very good job.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear it!
Good job on Harry's mixed emotions. The scene with young Snape and Harry was interesting. I'm really wondering what he makes of the entire situation.
I do feel sorry for Lily. She absolutely hates James and with good reason.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually planning to (hopefully) add something to this universe so that you get a glimpse of both Snapes' point of view, and what they make of everything. Might take a while though... I feel for Lily too! How dare the evil author reveal to her that she's going to marry someone she hates! (muahaha).
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