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Title: Epilogue 13 May 2009 3:10 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it, really loved it - the whole story!!! You are a brilliant writer and I enjoyed your take on "time travel to the Marauder era" quite a lot! It was positively original! And your insight into the characters was both unique and genuine (I especially liked how you described Pettygrew and both sides of the Marauders!!!) and still IC where it was possible.
    I would like to see a sequel - maybe sse how the changes in the perspectives of all involved could alter the way certain people act towards each other. And I'd like to see how this matured version of Harry would interact with a (slightly) changed Snape, and even how Harry's interaction with the two remaining Marauders might be influenced by his stay in the past. But I don't know whether you have any plans in that direction.
    Anyway, thank you so much for sharing - I really enjoyed the reading!

    Author's Response: Well, it's wonderful to hear that you enjoyed it so much! I'm thinking about doing a companion piece where there are snippets of Snape in the first person - to tell his side of the story and what he thought of it... may take a while though, as I've recently been attacked by several rabid plot bunnies that refuse to leave me alone! But anyway, I don't think I'm done with this universe yet, so I'll hopefully end up adding something to it eventually. Thank you for your kind review!
Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2009 7:41 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was unexpected, to say the least! Will they meet the young Severus as well? And I can see Lily being shocked, after all, she really doesn't care for James at this point.

    Author's Response: I daresay Harry was just as surprised :D Oh, absolutely - there's no way I could write a fic with two Snapes without them both coming into the picture at some point!
Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 3:00 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice story. Snape (both of them) are very IC, which is tough to do. I really like that Harry had the opportunity to meet his parents and see them as they were at 15.

    Author's Response: Thank you! A more canon Snape was certainly difficult to write, but more rewarding I found (and it's wonderful to hear that you liked BOTH of them). I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading this!
Title: Chapter 5 11 May 2009 1:42 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg this chapter literally had me in tears!
    You've done such a good job with this!!

    Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you liked it. That chapter caught me out when I read it through too - it was the bit when Harry started talking about the cupboard that got me!
Title: Epilogue 10 May 2009 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done! I loved the pranks and Snape was truly in character the entire time.

    Great read. Thank you.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I did like writing a more canon Snape for once, and the pranks... well, we all have a bit of silliness in us, don't we? :D
Title: Chapter 4 10 May 2009 11:46 am
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What does ' “...” ' mean? Is it a miss-type or an error of some sort? Are you having trouble formatting your story?

    Author's Response: No, it was purposeful - I was writing the whole scene through conversation, so the "..." indicated silence. I suppose I could remove the quotations... I'll go and have a look.
Title: Epilogue 10 May 2009 10:59 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Really, really great story. I loved the relationship you built between Harry and Snape and all without any schmaltzy OOC moments. The past marauders were great too, and loved the hopeful ending!

    Author's Response: Thank you! A slightly more canon Snape was certainly refreshing to write for once - I'll have to add him in more often. The Marauders were hard to keep in character at first, but they fell into place as soon as I let Sirius go a bit batty! Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Epilogue 10 May 2009 3:15 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story--I really enjoyed it! I thought the spells you used for pranking were very original and the writing was very genuine. I was sad that Harry had to go back, but I'm glad that he's found a mentor in Snape. This is very well written and definitely one of my favorite fics of this fest. Excellent work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you - that's wonderful to hear! And thank you for all your lovely reviews - they made my day!
Title: Chapter 5 10 May 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, I like how they actually had a returning audience! Very nice work--I'm so glad Snape saved Harry!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I felt they needed it... well... Harry needed it. Hermione and Ron were probably asking Dumbledore if he knew where Harry was for the umpteeth time when *poof* there he was!
Title: Chapter 4 10 May 2009 2:46 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Good thing this isn't a cliffie because it would drive me nuts! I'm excited to see where this baby is headed!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I was tempted, I was very, very tempted... :D

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