Ha! Interesting work with the sorting hat. Very refreshing as sortings go. that part about Sev was very original too. It gives so many possibilities for future plot,that I already wish this was muuuuch longer than 35 th. words. Mila
I like this story! I was glad you wrote so much about Nev, people tend to overlook him... Mila
| Title: Chapter 8: Tangled Loyalties
| 13 May 2009 8:31 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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This denouement is something Dumbledore would have thought of.
Not a compliment, I'm afraid.
| Title: Chapter 7: Magical Theory
| 13 May 2009 8:21 am
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'They’re wizards, Mr Potter,” Severus told him. “They don’t do logical.”
Hee!
| Title: Chapter 6: Secrets
| 13 May 2009 8:13 am
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Albus is a flaming nutbar, to be frank.
| Title: Chapter 5: Magic
| 13 May 2009 8:05 am
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An interesting development...!
| Title: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later
| 13 May 2009 7:54 am
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| Reviewer: Alx Black (Anonymous)
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That was a brilliant story! I love to find stories with unusual circumstances. I think I have only ever seen one other story where Harry was a Hufflepuff. It is also quite rare to find a story in which ether Neville or Hermione are well developed, and even rarer to find on in which both are featured so beautifully.
I love the relationship you created for Severus and Voldemort. The idea that he was born evil and therefore should have been killed at birth has always bothered me as well. While his reformation and transformation in the end were a bit too radical and perfect for me, it didn't ruin the story.
The plot seemed a bit rushed to me. I would have preferred that it developed over several years. Part way through first year just seems a bit too soon to me. The final chapter also seemed a bit rushed in that twenty year were condensed into one chapter.
Overall this is a very well written, well thought out fanfiction and I am glad that I read it. I just wish it was a few dozen chapters longer. ;)
| Title: Chapter 3: Looking Beneath
| 13 May 2009 5:59 am
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It's getting more and more interesting...
| Title: Chapter 2: Not What It Appears
| 13 May 2009 5:50 am
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Very good take on Severus...
And the Hufflepuff sortings were very funny.
Query: How could a wand choose Harry if he has no magic?
| Title: Chapter 1: Family
| 13 May 2009 5:35 am
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(contrary to popular belief, he did have perfectly good manners, he just didn’t bother using them most of the time).
Hee!
The interaction between Albus and Severus and Neville and his Gran is both witty and characteristic.
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