| Title: Prologue
| 13 May 2009 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Albus' arrogance is really incorrigible.
| Title: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later
| 13 May 2009 4:29 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Brilliant of Jan to think it up, and brilliant wirting skills on your part to make it come to life.
I really enjoyed that Unexpected ending! ;)
| Title: Chapter 8: Tangled Loyalties
| 13 May 2009 4:22 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg. You are just too brilliant. This story is brilliant.
What a great ending. Using love to defeat Voldie, but in an unexpected way. You've kept us on our toes throughout the story. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 7: Magical Theory
| 13 May 2009 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh my God, this just gets better and better and more complex and interesting.
Magic trapped in Harry, that has strangled his own magic. Am I summarizing it correctly?
I guess that Ron doesn't exist in this story? I do like, however, that you have explored Neville as a character. Great friendship and loyalty.
This story is just so exciting and complex and very well-written Bil. I'm so anxious to read more and more from you.
Wow! Poor Harry. Thank goodness, he has such loyal friends. He would have been very vulnerable indeed against that threat.
I love that he has this latent powerful magic of sorts.
OOoh, this story is just so interesting.
| Title: Chapter 4: Settling In
| 13 May 2009 3:42 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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It's sad really that Severus got so taken in by Voldie. Very sad that he trusted the man like a father--a brother.
I love Sev's reaction when he realises that Harry has no magic, and the fact that Harry doesn't care at all.
Great story.
| Title: Chapter 3: Looking Beneath
| 13 May 2009 3:40 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow, that was really unexpected. The three in Hufflepuff.
I'm glad that Sev discovered the abuse. I just hope that by promising to keep quiet about it, that it doesn't continue!
I'm really liking the originality of this story.
Great beginning! It might not be meant to be comical, but I had to grin as I imagined the expression on Albus' face when he read Harry's reply.
| Title: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later
| 12 May 2009 11:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous)
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Your fiction makes me want to laugh, cry and violently stab myself in the eye, alternately or, sometimes, at once. Because one moment I think "This rings so true, I would so write the same thing, had I a half of her talent and whatnot", and the next moment it's like "Oh my freaking god, the characters can't really be doing that, can they??" Well.. it's not necessarily a bad thing, but at times readers might wish for more balance. Keep up good work =)
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