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Title: The best thing ever 31 Dec 2009 7:35 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun duuuuunnnn! Ooo, the suspense is killing me! lol What are we going to do if poor Harry doesn't find his godfather there? I have an inkling that things are not going to go exactly as planned... But then, this IS Harry Potter, and when have things EVER gone as planned around him? ;)

    I vote in favor of longer chapters with a longer wait. However, please do continue with the tiny succinct synopsis of the previous chapter; it's very helpful, particularly with long interim waits.

    Author's Response:

    Worth knowing the little synopsis is helpful, I know I can get a bit muddled myself and forget what's happening, particularly after a longish wait between chapters...

    Trouble *does* just seem to follow Harry round, so we will have to see...

    Thanks loads for your review :)  

Title: The best thing ever 31 Dec 2009 8:41 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This length was fine, shorter but less of a wait. Please post soon, I am curious to see what happens tonight. Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks:) Seems to be quite a mix of what people want but I will try my best not to let it go too long...

     

Title: The best thing ever 31 Dec 2009 8:40 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This length was fine, shorter but less of a wait. Please post soon, I am curious to see what happens tonight. Great chapter.
Title: The best thing ever 30 Dec 2009 2:38 am
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you misspelled the caretaker's name. You spelled his name as 'Finch' but it's 'Filch' (unless you were referring to a different character). Great story progression! Harry and Severus really can get along. I think I would prefer shorter chapters more often, so long as the shorter chapters don't end in a cliffy. That would just be unsatisfying unless the cilffy was at the end of a long chapter.

    Author's Response:

    You're right, it should be Filch- not sure where that came from!

    Well, I will see what happens and perhaps go for a middle ground...

    The cliffy point it interesting. I always try to have a chapter add something to the story and leave an idea of where things might go next. Sometimes people have said my chapters end in a cliffy when I haven't seen them as being that way at all. However I can't deny the last one *was* a cliffy and I do understand too many might get annoying. I will bear it in mind...

Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 10:18 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have a really bad feeling about their excursion. I understand why Conner wants to keep his animagus shape a secret but they really should have told someone what they are planning to do. This cannot be a good idea.

    Author's Response:

    It's not very sensible or safe is it? But there's no chance Harry will let that put him off...

    Cheers for taking the time to review :)

Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo-hoo! Another chapter! Personally, I'd rather have shorter chapters more often. The story flows better for me, that way.

    Oooh, I don't even know what to think. Harry's plans never go as well for him as he wishes or thinks they will. Something will go wrong. I wonder though if Sirius really is alive... should be interesting to find out!

    Keep up the awesome work!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Yes I know, long gaps aren't the best thing in the world for any fic.

    No, Harry's not got the best of luck, has he? We'll have to wait and see about Sirius...

Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    personaly i would rather have short updates more often. I'm realy enjoying this story, but the wait for new chapters is KILLING ME!!! LOL.

    cant wait for the next chapie!!!

    Hugs 4 u if u update soon!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'd best get writing then... lol :)

    Seriously though I will try not to let it go so long between chapters cos I know that can be frustrating.

     I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 12:32 am
Reviewer: mwc (Signed) [Report This]
    definitely longer ones with more of a wait. i LOVE long chapters. =)

    afb means "away from book." it's an older acronym, might not be used as much now.

    Author's Response:

    Ah! I'm always interested to learn new acronyms. Was actually pretty obvious now you say it. Doh.

     Personally I'm with you re the long chapters but got a pretty mixed response so will have to see what happens :)

Title: The best thing ever 28 Dec 2009 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I just hope that Harry has not gotten his hopes up for nothing.

    I'm nervous about this. What if it's not Sirius,the black dog, and it has something to do with Voldie!

    Great chappie. Don't worry about it being shorter than usual. I'm stuck in writer's block as well, and it's not fun. When you write anything, best to get it off, and concentrate on the next chappie. You did great though!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes fingers crossed for poor Harry... Things never tend to go to smoothly for him do they?

    Ah writer's block is horrible. One thing I used to do for essays, when I literally could end up staring at the screen for ages cos I didn't know what to say, was start typing anything even if it's rubbish. You can always go back later and delete or rewrite bits but I'm sure the vast majority of it will be really good! Sometimes you just need to force yourself to get started if you know what I mean. 

    Fingers crossed that you stop being stuck soon anyway.

    Thanks for reviewing, it's much appreciated as always.


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