| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 07 Jul 2009 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Anonymous)
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So...I was rereading this story and my mind started to come to parallels. I realized just how fawn-like Harry really was...not just because of his parents. A lot of people set him as a puppy of some kind because of his defenselessness and natural tendencies to try to please. I see after reading this how much Harry is a fawn after thinking about it. He's far more defenseless than anyone at the school could really realize. I'm just wondering if the Dursleys might make an appearance? Will this end up being a Snape-adopts-Harry story? I love those.
:3 Okay...so the first thing I'm going to do is beg for another chapter because this is adorable. I have seen many Harry-is-a-creature sort of stories but I haven't seen a fawn and this is the most befitting. I'm seriously hoping that Harry will totally take a "Bambi-spill" on a wet corridor and Snape had to chase after him. XD This really has been cute so far and Snape befits his usual temperment.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 04 Jul 2009 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed)
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ah this story is so cute!!
I cant wait for more. :3
please update when you can.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 04 Jul 2009 7:59 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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ROFL oh, this is great. Fantastic. Amazing. Poor Sev.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 03 Jul 2009 9:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous)
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*groans* Oh, please, you don't carry fawns like you carry cats.. you carry them like you carry cattle. That is, an arm under the neck and an arm under the haunches, effectively crisscrossing the legs. Which gives the sods an unfortunate access to your face with their warm slimy tongue...
Duh, you could've so played it out >:3
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 03 Jul 2009 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: mwc (Anonymous)
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dear snot on his robes! this story is adorable, can't wait for more. =)
This is such an interesting story! I can not wait to see what happens with Snape and his fawn--er i mean 'Potter' haha. Malfoy mentioned in the first chapter that a cure would take weeks to brew, I wonder how long Snape can withstand such absurdity living with a 'deer-brained' boy! I laughed a lot with this. I got a funny picture in my head of a fawn hiding beneath Snape's robes. How cute though. Keep it up!
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 03 Jul 2009 2:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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update soon please. harry is so sweet as a fawn.
I LOVE THIS. Please continue.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 02 Jul 2009 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I only have three words to say about this story:
I LOVE IT!!!!
This is such an adorable story. I want a fawn now. So sweet, funny, and very well written. I can't wait for the next update.
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