| Title: Chapter 3: Until Spring
| 08 Jul 2009 1:09 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Sorry, clicked on the 9 instead of the 10. This story is definitely a "10"
| Title: Chapter 3: Until Spring
| 08 Jul 2009 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, I just love this sweet story! I want a fawn! LOL!
I feel bad for Severus, and I'm aching for poor Harry, so vulnerable young and hurting inside, and now helpless as well.
You are such a gifted writer. Very nicely written, and too sickeningly sweet, but sweet all the same, without being over done.
| Title: Chapter 3: Until Spring
| 08 Jul 2009 12:24 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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I am speechless.
It is hard to do that with me, I assure you.
A reader can tell that you have researched this story very carefully. I enjoy reading Harry and Severus' interaction together.
I hope you continue to update. You are truly gifted.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
Wow pretty deep but very well written. I really loved the conversation between Snape and Dumbledore. My oh my is Dumbles sneaky or what? I wonder though how Severus is going to handle dealing with fawn Harry, teaching in Hogwarts, the Dark Lord Death Eater meanings, and above all brewing that extremely difficult potion. The man really has his hands full doesn't he? Looking forward to reading chapter four =D
| Title: Chapter 3: Until Spring
| 07 Jul 2009 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed)
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That's an absolute great warning to those who think wild animals are okay to pet because they don't seem dangerous.
I live in California and the kids when they see Deer chase after them, sadly their parents don't teach them to leave them the heck alone.
There once was a lone young deer not a fawn, but not adult either but it got stuck in the school and a teacher tried to make it leave by just slowly walking towards it but sadly the next day we found the deer had been killed by a mountain lion, still on school property.
Very rare to see Deer now =(
Poor Severus, Bad Dumbledore and his manipulative tendencies, but then without it then we wouldn't have this story :3 please update when you can.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 07 Jul 2009 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Anonymous)
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So...I was rereading this story and my mind started to come to parallels. I realized just how fawn-like Harry really was...not just because of his parents. A lot of people set him as a puppy of some kind because of his defenselessness and natural tendencies to try to please. I see after reading this how much Harry is a fawn after thinking about it. He's far more defenseless than anyone at the school could really realize. I'm just wondering if the Dursleys might make an appearance? Will this end up being a Snape-adopts-Harry story? I love those.
:3 Okay...so the first thing I'm going to do is beg for another chapter because this is adorable. I have seen many Harry-is-a-creature sort of stories but I haven't seen a fawn and this is the most befitting. I'm seriously hoping that Harry will totally take a "Bambi-spill" on a wet corridor and Snape had to chase after him. XD This really has been cute so far and Snape befits his usual temperment.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 04 Jul 2009 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed)
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ah this story is so cute!!
I cant wait for more. :3
please update when you can.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 04 Jul 2009 7:59 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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ROFL oh, this is great. Fantastic. Amazing. Poor Sev.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 03 Jul 2009 9:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous)
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*groans* Oh, please, you don't carry fawns like you carry cats.. you carry them like you carry cattle. That is, an arm under the neck and an arm under the haunches, effectively crisscrossing the legs. Which gives the sods an unfortunate access to your face with their warm slimy tongue...
Duh, you could've so played it out >:3
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