| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 03 Jul 2009 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: mwc (Anonymous)
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dear snot on his robes! this story is adorable, can't wait for more. =)
This is such an interesting story! I can not wait to see what happens with Snape and his fawn--er i mean 'Potter' haha. Malfoy mentioned in the first chapter that a cure would take weeks to brew, I wonder how long Snape can withstand such absurdity living with a 'deer-brained' boy! I laughed a lot with this. I got a funny picture in my head of a fawn hiding beneath Snape's robes. How cute though. Keep it up!
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 03 Jul 2009 2:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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update soon please. harry is so sweet as a fawn.
I LOVE THIS. Please continue.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 02 Jul 2009 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I only have three words to say about this story:
I LOVE IT!!!!
This is such an adorable story. I want a fawn now. So sweet, funny, and very well written. I can't wait for the next update.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 02 Jul 2009 8:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Ahhh!!! Love it! Amazing story, and I love this Potter fawn. Harry, the ‘fawn-who-lived'. LOL! That was awesome. Your Snape tone of voice is great, as are all of the descriptions. I love the events and pace so far. The crying Harry makes as a fawn is heart breaking. Fantastic job.
I have smiled through this entire chapter. The whole situation is very amusing, especially Snape's reactions and thoughts. I am looking forward to the next chapter very much.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Pain in the Pinfeathers
| 02 Jul 2009 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Wonderful! I had tears in my eyes even while I was laughing. I particularly liked the line that deer brains were larger than Potter brains. And just the image of Snape holding a baby fawn while it cuddles in his arms is hilarious, as is Harry-fawn hiding beneath his robes, and Severus anxiously creeping through the castle trying to avoid being seen with the fawn.
But it does show that Severus truly does have a good heart. As grouchy and sour as he is, he is being kind to Harry-fawn, even after knowing that it was Harry.
Looking forward to more!
This is a wonderful story! I can just see fawn/Harry nuzzling the Patronus doe. And the image of the fawn following Severus just makes me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it made you smile. :)
| Title: Chapter 1: Man Was in the Forest
| 02 Jul 2009 11:41 am
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Anonymous)
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I love this please update hen you can.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you'll like the second chapter too!
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