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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
Title: Silence Broken 25 Feb 2011 2:37 pm
Reviewer: JulyhaLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    more please? awesome story.

    Author's Response: A new chapter should be up very soon. ;)
Title: Silence Broken 30 Jan 2011 9:29 am
Reviewer: Fox (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your story is awsome! It keeps me wanting to know what happens next! But is Harry going to have his appearance change, as it was alluded to happen in chapter 24, in lily's letter? Keep writing, for the sake of my questionable Sanity. :)

    Author's Response: As far as Harry's appearance goes, it'll play a part in the storyline. We're a bit far from that point, but be reassured I haven't forgotten about that. Thanks!
Title: Silence Broken 23 Jan 2011 4:11 am
Reviewer: Clari_Nevermore (Signed) [Report This]
    Well. Horcruxes. And a weepy snape. I really, really want to hug him right now. :D But a question, If I may ask... what are you going to do with this horcrux? Will it only appear when it feels threatened, or will it surface when Harry is scared or angry? It's killing because I don't know yet, but I love the stories where the horcrux in Harry makes him just lose it. I don't think Harry's going to be pulling stunts like that anytime soon, though. ^^

    Author's Response: The horcrux is definitely going to be an interesting thing for Harry. I haven't decided yet how big of part it'll play in Harry's everyday life, but I have a feeling it'll refuse to be ignored. Thanks!
Title: Silence Broken 20 Jan 2011 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a lovely emotional, in a good sense, chapter. Loved their talk and the fact that Harry is being cautious about Severus he has never had anyone who has stayed around and he is anti adult even in cannon

    Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter explore more of Harry's caution towards adults since that'll definitely not be something that'll change overnight for Harry. 
Title: Silence Broken 19 Jan 2011 3:02 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww totally vulnerable! what a horrible thing for poor Severus to finally find out about his son, the end was rather sweet with him feeling like he is able to just sit and hug Harry without it being odd, very sweet :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Now that Harry is off chemo for a bit we'll see if they continue to get along. 
Title: Silence Broken 19 Jan 2011 4:11 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yes, they are both very vulnerable right now. I hope that they can someday be comfortable around each other.

    Oh what a horrible break; for Harry to have that Horcrux inside of him.

    I really hope that Severus can find a way to get rid of the Horcrux without hurting Harry in any way.

    Author's Response: I don't think Severus will fully be able to rest until he's found a way to deal with the horcrux. I'm sure one day they'll be comfortable around each other, but it'll definitely take time. Thanks!
Title: Silence Broken 18 Jan 2011 11:31 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter as usual. Now the dreade horey things have raised their ugly head....as Sev thought this kid just can't cut a break. It will be nice to see Harry off chemo for a while. We'll see if our two boys try to kill each other with I hoping Harry feeling a little better. Thank you so much for the update. I so look forward to them.

    Author's Response: Funny that you mention the two of them clashing. The next chapter Harry has a bit more energy and they don't always see eye to eye on everything. Thanks!
Title: Silence Broken 18 Jan 2011 10:20 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter Ella. I see what you meant about pacing. I enjoyed the various different scenes with Molly, the twins, and Ron and of course Sev, Harry and Dumby.

    That's interesting about the Horcrux. Maybe some good will come out of this bad situation.

    Ha, yeah they were both vulnerable in this chapter. :-D

    It's good of Severus to mention that if Harry hasn't grown at the conclusion of his cancer treatment, they could talk about using growth potions. That shows that Severus cares about the "small" things too.

    "How much could one child handle without breaking? Harry kept testing the limits, and each time Severus grew more worried that one more thing would send his child over the edge."

    like Severus, I wonder what will be the straw that breaks the camel's back.

    I'm glad that they are talking about personal things as well (the cupboard and other things about the horrid Dursley's.)

    I loved the last line, ""Not yet, but I think I'm getting there."" Very powerful :-D

    Author's Response: Thanks, aut! There'll definitely be a "straw that breaks the camel's back" but we're not there yet. This next chapter I'd say is an emotionally turbulent one. Not necessarily in a bad way but since it was written over the course of a few months it reflects my varied moods. 
Title: Silence Broken 18 Jan 2011 12:49 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. You were right-I had forgotten to consider the Horcrux in my list of possible causes for those red eyes. I hope the Chemo can get rid of the stupid thing. It's a bit like a parasite, maybe treating it as such could help get rid of it.

    thanks for the update.
    V.

    Author's Response: Imagine a standard parasitic medication could get rid of the horcrux in Harry. That's so simple it would be hilarious. lol. Thanks!
Title: Silence Broken 18 Jan 2011 9:33 am
Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, quick review because I'm going to school in the morning.

    I had to get drugged up for a surgery last Friday, and I was like, "Sleep..." the rest of the day... How does Harry do it!

    Another good chapter. I like how long it's taking Harry to deal with the fact that Severus is his father.

    Again, great chapter. I cannot wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Harry can't sleep 24/7 so although he's rather drugged up there's times he has some energy. It's definitely taking time for him to deal with the fact Severus is his father, and the next chapter explores that a bit more. 

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