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Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 12 Nov 2020 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent start
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 17 Aug 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks to be an interesting beginning! Poor Harry... he always has so much trouble. But if anyone knows about control, it is Snape. Maybe he can teach him something.
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 4:57 pm
Reviewer: me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is awesome! I cant wit for the next chapter! please update soon

    10

    Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the positive feedback! It realy inspires me to keep going :) I will try to do a good job updating regularly so you don't have to wait too long between chapters!
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Shana76 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry is so cute in your story, not such a pert brat . And SS and DD are very authentic as well. Like it , thanks a lot.

    Author's Response: Hi Shana76! Harry is still kind of in shock at the moment, and without his friends around, he is slightly more reserved and less sure of himself at the moment. Hopefully as the story goes on, the characters will grow ;) Anyway, I'm really glad you like the characterizations, thanks for taking the time to review!!
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 12:40 pm
Reviewer: manon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Super story,well done. Nearly can't wait for more.

    Please update ASAP

    Author's Response: Thank you, manon, for your nice review :) I'm glad you enjoy the story, and I will definitely try to keep it updated!
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 9:56 am
Reviewer: Marylou (Signed) [Report This]
    Great work Snapesangel!!! :)

    Hope to see more of this brilliant story soon.

    You describe Snape very well, very Snape-ish! Hahaha

    I really like your story so far, keep up that great work and PLEASE don't let us wait for to long , update soon ;-)!

    Marylou

    Author's Response: Hi Marylou, thanks a bunch for your review :) i'm so floored by the positive feedback, it is VERY motivating for me, so hopefully I will keep churning out the chapters. I love Snape SO much, so it is fun to write him. When I'm writing, I try to imagine Snape saying the things that I write, so hopefully that will keep it in character.

    Don't worry, update will be coming soon!
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 9:47 am
Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's a really good start. I like your writing style. And the persons are very well in character, I love that.

    Please write more soon, it's so interesting!!!

    Thanks :-)

    Author's Response:

    Hi Sally, thanks so much for taking the time to write a review ;) I'm really glad you like it so far, it is my first attempt at writing a fanfic, but I'm trying really hard to capture the characters, so it means a lot to me that you say that. New chapter should be up very soon, so keep an eye out for it!

Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 3:05 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great first chapter. I love any story that gets Harry away from the Dursleys, and this one sounds like it's going to be good! Can't wait for next post.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review missny1! Glad you think it is off to a good start, I will try to keep it interesting. New chapter coming shortly, I'm working on it now :) Harry is glad to be rid of the Dursley's,  but will find new challenges await him with Snape!
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 2:03 am
Reviewer: halfblood (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry got up from the couch and scurried toward the stairs, hoping and praying that Snape would put up a good fight.

    I loved that line!

    lol neither of them are going to be very impressed with Dumbledore's arrangement are they?!

    I like the way you write and will be interested to see if Snape becomes anymore sympathetic to Harry's reaction if he learns more about Dudley...

    Author's Response: Thanks so much halfblood! This is so thrilling for me, to FINALLY write a fic and have people leave positive reviews :) At the moment, neither Snape nor Harry are impressed, but now that they are stuck in this arrangement, they will have to figure things out. Snape, especially has a tough job ahead. He is not an overly sympathetic person (as well all know!), but sometimes when circumstances change, so do perceptions. They will have some interesting moments ahead, that's for sure!
Title: Chapter 1: Harry loses control 10 Aug 2009 1:44 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, nice beginning. Poor Harry though.

    In that much trouble for accidental magic. Poor kid. And having to stay with Snape. I wouldn't want to be in HIS shoes!!

    Great start. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, poor Harry indeed! He didn't really mean for things to get so out of hand, but his magic is powerful, so he needs to learn to get a grip on it! He is certainly not pleased to be with Snape, he definitely thinks it is worse than being at the Dursley's.  But we'll see, hopefully Snape will help him get his emotions, and his magic, under control. Should be a very *interesting* summer. 

     

    Thanks so much for taking the time to review! New chapter will be up soon :)


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