This is a wonderful story. I love the characterizations and believability. Great job!
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 12 Aug 2009 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: manon (Anonymous)
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Liked it. Great :-)
Persons are in character , well done.
Update ASAP
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 11 Aug 2009 3:03 pm
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| Reviewer: riasnape (Anonymous)
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Impressive start, hope Snape is not going to become all mushy too soon? Looking forward to the rest. Cheers
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 11 Aug 2009 12:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Marylou (Signed)
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Very good chapter, just great! Poor Harry though! But Snape is not a patient person at all. I think Harry will learn this very fast, when he spends his summer in Snapes house.
But it's not to bad for Harry to have some boundarys.
You describe the scenes very well, thats brilliant. Well written,and thank you very much for updating so fast.
(And sorry for my bad English)
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 11 Aug 2009 9:49 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, I love that Harry is with Snape and the whole accidental magic theme, even if harry doesn't have his wand its going to be interesting to watch sev control "accidential" magic. Can't wait for next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 11 Aug 2009 9:40 am
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| Reviewer: Shana76 (Anonymous)
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Brilliant! :-)
Oh oh...so much trouble!! But Snape is Snape , isn't he? And Harry really needs someone who looks after him ;-)
Well, this should be an interesting summer, for those two , indeed! LOL
(And for us!snicker)
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 11 Aug 2009 9:26 am
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| Reviewer: mariej (Anonymous)
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oooh, i like it! can't wait to see where this goes!
great chapter, your snape is really good.
| Title: Chapter 2: Let the games begin
| 11 Aug 2009 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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"...you will find yourself back over my knee for a spanking that makes this one seem like a happy memory.”
Hahaha, how very Snape-like!
Great chapter, persons are still very well in character, good job!
I really like your Snape and Harry too.
I don't get it. If Harry didn't use a wand, then How did the Ministry know?
It's been said repeatedly that wandless magic is undetectible.
The Ministry tracks wand-magic.
Author's Response: Hi mithrilandtj- yes, you make a good point, but this story doesn't adhere exactly to canon. For this story, Harry's use of magic- wandless or otherwise- is of great concern to the Ministry because of its implications (especially in the Muggle world). Although it is the premise on which this story is based, and the reason for Harry ending up in Snape's care, as a detail it is not extremely important to the direction the story will take. However, if this departure from canon upsets you, I suggest you not continue to read this fic.
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