ah so nice of an ending to a rather sad beginning!!!
wow i loved this i loved the emotion and the truth in this
This is amazing. Just...yeah, amazing. I am especially struck with admiration and adoration for Poppy Pomfrey in this, and for you in managing to prevent anybody from breaking character while stretching them to their limits. Just lovely.
| Title: To Have and To Hold
| 05 Feb 2010 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely I wish there was more especially how Dumbledore wriggled out of this one but thank you so much
Wonderful one shot but I'd love to see "the rest of the story" so to speak. I see so much possibility here......
Very interesting take on abused!Harry. I really liked Snape and Ron in this, and Hermione too.
| Title: To Have and To Hold
| 01 Sep 2009 8:25 am
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| Reviewer: Taryn (Signed)
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WHAT TREES WHAAT.
the capital letters at the end baffled me, and I lost my train of thought.
anyhow; Reaction = oh. -sadness- -write more-.
| Title: To Have and To Hold
| 01 Sep 2009 6:27 am
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| Reviewer: feyathene (Anonymous)
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I can honestly say it started off brilliantly. I really like the premise. The further I got into it, though, the less believable I found it. While Ron and Hermione's characterisations were plausible to how they might behave in such a situation (even Sev's was a rather good portrayal), I can't help but feel Harry himself was a little over the top. His reactions seem out of character with what we know of him and while having a thing like an abusive home life revealed to the Hogwarts community (and likely the wizarding world as a whole) might alter his behavior, I doubt the change would as drastically in the direction you've chosen here. On the whole, however, a solid effort and I did enjoy reading your work. Good Job.
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