Title: Little Wonder
| 12 Aug 2010 9:43 pm
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Reviewer: fiction fan (Anonymous)
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nice, a bit fluffy but a good start. There are a few typo's... don't know if that happened in the upload or not... (in your end notes you have "eadmaster" and I think there were a few others... FYI...
Oh this is SO awesome! Please update as soon as you possibly can, I cannot wait for more of this. =)
Awwwwww, Love this story. Harry sounds more three or four here instead of seven. Developmentally delayed?? "BOB" a house elf names Bob. I love it. Great start. Hope you update soon.
liking the story so far, hope you update soon :)
Ohmigod, I totally want to hunt Petunia down and hurt her! Poor, darling Harry! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Love it.
Very nicely done. I didn't find the chapter slow at all. It was a necessary bit of character development. I especially liked the reference to the last time that Severus had to use his "soothing voice". Little bits of information like that tell your readers important things about his character. Harry wasn't odd, or rather no odder than any almost 8 year old whose been locked in a cupboard , starved and abused for 7 years. It would be odder if he were normal.
Please keep working on this story and know that I, at least, will be looking forward to your next post.
Title: Little Wonder
| 06 Jan 2010 12:34 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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HARRY NEEDS TO SEE A SPEECH THERAPIST AND HAVE SOME SUPPLEMENTS. I can't stand Dumbledore so I'd have him try to return Harry and Severus fight him thank you for your story
Title: Little Wonder
| 02 Jan 2010 9:21 pm
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Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Enjoying the story very much and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Title: Little Wonder
| 31 Dec 2009 9:17 am
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Reviewer: maquislady1388 (Anonymous)
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I think perhaps Harry spoke up about the way his relatives treated him to quickly. I'm not an expert on abuse but most abused or neglected children go out of there way to hide the abuse, or are conditioned by their abusers not to say anything to anyone about it. I can't imagine that the dursley's would be any different. Other then that Good job.
Title: Little Wonder
| 31 Dec 2009 8:10 am
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Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Harry is not odd, he's acting like someone who is not used to getting food. Its a great chapter. Post soon!
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