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Title: Little Wonder 12 Aug 2010 9:43 pm
Reviewer: fiction fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice, a bit fluffy but a good start.
    There are a few typo's... don't know if that happened in the upload or not... (in your end notes you have "eadmaster" and I think there were a few others... FYI...
Title: Little Wonder 28 Mar 2010 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is SO awesome! Please update as soon as you possibly can, I cannot wait for more of this. =)
Title: Little Wonder 21 Feb 2010 10:28 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwww, Love this story. Harry sounds more three or four here instead of seven. Developmentally delayed?? "BOB" a house elf names Bob. I love it. Great start. Hope you update soon.
Title: Little Wonder 10 Jan 2010 7:32 pm
Reviewer: icecream_effn_sundae (Signed) [Report This]
    liking the story so far, hope you update soon :)
Title: Little Wonder 08 Jan 2010 3:25 pm
Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohmigod, I totally want to hunt Petunia down and hurt her! Poor, darling Harry! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Love it.
Title: Little Wonder 07 Jan 2010 7:53 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nicely done. I didn't find the chapter slow at all. It was a necessary bit of character development. I especially liked the reference to the last time that Severus had to use his "soothing voice". Little bits of information like that tell your readers important things about his character. Harry wasn't odd, or rather no odder than any almost 8 year old whose been locked in a cupboard , starved and abused for 7 years. It would be odder if he were normal.

    Please keep working on this story and know that I, at least, will be looking forward to your next post.
Title: Little Wonder 06 Jan 2010 12:34 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    HARRY NEEDS TO SEE A SPEECH THERAPIST AND HAVE SOME SUPPLEMENTS. I can't stand Dumbledore so I'd have him try to return Harry and Severus fight him thank you for your story
Title: Little Wonder 02 Jan 2010 9:21 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Enjoying the story very much and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Title: Little Wonder 31 Dec 2009 9:17 am
Reviewer: maquislady1388 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think perhaps Harry spoke up about the way his relatives treated him to quickly. I'm not an expert on abuse but most abused or neglected children go out of there way to hide the abuse, or are conditioned by their abusers not to say anything to anyone about it. I can't imagine that the dursley's would be any different. Other then that Good job.
Title: Little Wonder 31 Dec 2009 8:10 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry is not odd, he's acting like someone who is not used to getting food. Its a great chapter. Post soon!

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