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Reviews For Brothers of Bond
Just anything to tie them together at the beginning.
"one of the best decisions he'd every made" Think you meant EVER, not EVERY. "Vernon awoke and plundered his way downstairs" haha, I think if you knew what "plunder" meant, you'd get why it's funny. Maybe you meant "pounded" or "thundered"? ...too many other mistakes to note here... You could really use a beta or two.
Author's Response: Penguins1, Thanks, I am very pleased to hear that! -Mel :)
-P.G. Author's Response: P.G, Yeah, I agree. What they go through is wrong and unfair but the fact that they have each other does provide them with comfort and makes it not as bad as it could of been for they know that at least one other person does care about them. Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Amaitoru, Thank-you, I'm happy to hear that. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Writeurlife, Thanks, I'm glad you think so. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Becky, Is it really that bad or noticeable? I did not find too many mistakes, but I will take the beta advice itno consideration. Thanks. -Mel :)
Can't wait to see your video. Author's Response: Pandora, Thank-you! :) I'm glad it's original and I debated for a while involvng the hous situation and decided to put them both in the same house, but Slytherin didn't fit and I figured that if Draco had grown up differently he may not have had the "pureblood above all" slammed into his skull :P. The idea of the Dursleys is something I really enjoy, so I'm thrilled to hear that you like to to. The video is being annoying, but I am working on it and it should be up asap! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Petuniac3, Thanks, I'm glad you think so. -Mel :) |
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