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Title: Hogwarts 18 Feb 2010 7:22 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix Phyre (Signed) [Report This]
    What happened to Dean and Seamus? Did they, like the Philosopher's Stone, not make your cut?

    Otherwise, great story, and I look forward to reading more

    Author's Response:

    Phoenix phyre,

    Only Seamus, I never really liked him so he was my choice to cut out and make room for Draco in Gryffindor. Although I really wanted to keep Neville, I also prefer Dean around as well since he is muggle-born. I have also only taken out events that may not have occured because of Draco, such as Harry getting on the Quidditch team first year. I removed Querill as well, hense no stone issues. :P.

    Thanks for the comments and review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 14 Sep 2009 6:07 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    This is the first of your story I have read. I really enjoyed it!! Snape not like Harry because of his hair??? Nooooo. At least you said he won't dislike Harry for long!!! Your writing is quite good. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    Really? Thanks, glad to hear it. Draco had done Harry's hair so it looked quite different, so Snape thought he didn't actually look like a Potter clone, but now that his hair is back to normal he looks a lot more like James and Snape is annoyed for getting his hopes up. Because to Snape, if the boy looks like his father than he must be like him *grumbles*, well until he has evidence otherwise. Heh anyway yeah...thanks and I will!

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 14 Sep 2009 3:49 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooooh! VERY interesting! I loved it! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rms92,

    Haha, I'm pleased to hear that! Thanks and will update a bit later one today.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 13 Sep 2009 5:00 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    HA! Draco is Gyffindor! (I was getting a little worried when that Slytherin-enthusiastic boy was talking and Ron was bashing the Slytherins, and Draco being half-confused/offended since his parents were Slytherins. And Snape choking on the pumpkin juice was funny. If Lucius were alive, I think he'd die too with that sorting! That must have been painful for Snape to watch Harry pretty much transform into James. Ouch! Poor Snape. I love this!

    Author's Response:

    Raven knight,

    I am seriously loving your reviews! :P. 

    Yeah that moment was rather puzzling for Draco but alas, he is indeed a Gryffindor. I could actually picture Snape choking on a Malfoy being sorted into Slytherin, hehe. Lucius would have been a hilarious reaction to see, indeed!

    It was rather painful for Snape since he had gotten his hopes up (Harry being more like Lily than James) and then have him "transform" into his rival, he wasn't too happy, no :(. But things will change soon enough. Thanks, I'm pleased to hear it! Thank-you for your review!

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 13 Sep 2009 6:32 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    good chappie. can't wait until snape gets to know the boys instead of watching them from afar

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Thank-you. Yeah, I'm still working on that part and editing bits around that, trying to make sure it'll be good, should be soon enough though.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 13 Sep 2009 3:18 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought this was a great chapter xx

    More soon please xx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    I'm glad to hear that, thanks. And yeah, I'll be updating either later today or tomorrow.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 13 Sep 2009 2:40 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I so hope they will reach out to Snape and tell him of their so called 'home' life.

    Author's Response:

    DazzlingD,

    Maybe in the future, but right now they're convinced that they're on their own and that no adult would care for them, give a damn or even listen. But Snape will find out, no doubt about that...one way or another.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 13 Sep 2009 2:22 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this so far. I love how close the boys are, though I think it's probably causing some dormitory suspicions...yikes. Anyways, I look forward to reading more and finding out what Snape has to say to them.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Thanks, I'm happy to hear that. It is causing some supicions but that'll pass once the boys get used to their own beds. Thank-you, and yeah. :P

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 12 Sep 2009 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Actually, what would have been really funny is if Harry were sorted into Slytherin and Draco, Gryffindor! But this is great too. I loved that Snape choked on his drink when Draco was sorted.

    I can't wait to see more of Snape trying to get used to Harry and Draco.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    I was actually going to have it that way with Harry in Slytherin and Draco in Gryffindor. Seriously, it was almost decided but that would still have the bots seperated so I didn't end up doing it that way, but I was so going to. Thanks and yeah, I imagine that anyone would be laughing if they'd noticed Snape actually choking on his drink because of a sorting result :P. Thanks, he's got a lot to get used to.

    -Mel :)


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