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Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 16 Sep 2009 6:24 am
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    The one sentence that intrigued me the most? Where Irma Pince mentions having a son...Could that son be Severus by any weird twist? Cause that'd be cool! I like how perceptive and still Slytherin-ly clever Draco is. Poor Snape, holding back his connection to the boys. *moves on to next chapter* This Matthew fellow, he seems like canon Draco almost, so this is pretty interesting...

    Author's Response:

    Raven Knight,

    Hehe, I wondered if many would pick up on that fact, although I can't give anything away just yet. I have decided to write Draco in a simular sense to who Harry is "A Slytherin and yet he's in Gryffindor and morphs into a pure Gryffindor", the hat wanted to place Harry in the house of snakes too, remember? :P. Mathew however, even though he's a bully he is actually a lot meaner than Draco is as canon, for he doesn't live to mock others and make himself important but purely to cause pain and fights. He's thrives on trouble and is just a very hateful person. But yeah, he's taken Draco's canon place as the "bully and enemy". Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 15 Sep 2009 1:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that's good. Now two people suspect something's going on, and if they compare notes, maybe Harry and Draco will finally get away from those horrible Dursleys.

    I love how sneaky Snape was in observing the boys fighting, and while not deducting points from his own House, he gave them all detention.

    Nice work in developing the story. I like how Snape acts like he hates Harry, but obviously he doesn't really, even if he won't admit it to himself or Harry.

    Looking forward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    More people are becoming suspicious and perhaps they will be able to put the pieces together even though Snape sort of has but refuses to "over-react" or accept that the boys are really that mistreated and unloved for it was what he's always feared. As for them getting away from the Dursleys...hm, maybe.

    Sneaky Slytherin...that's Snape ;). And yeah, he knew Mathew wasn't all innocent. Thank-you, and you're right...he certainly doesn't hate Harry as much as he is trying to convince himself that he does hehe. Glad to hear it, will update soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 15 Sep 2009 2:23 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter...at leasr he knows a little of what has happened xxx

    9/10

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thanks, and yeah he does now...although he doesn't know the finer details just yet. Ooh, nice rating...thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 15 Sep 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter--I love that Snape is suspicious, but not willing to jump in head first and tackle the problem. He does that too often in fics. Really, the average person tends not to help people if they think someone else will do it instead (sadly). I have enjoyed their interactions though and am looking forward to more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Thank-you! I know what you mean, although it's not because he thinks that someone else will handle the problem but it's more of the fact that he is unsure of the direction to take it. If he gets enough clues or reasons to be concerned, you can bet that he will not be doing nothing about it. Thanks, pleased to hear it and will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 14 Sep 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, very, very interesting! Poor Harry and Draco! I feel so sorry for them. I can not wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    Hehe, glad to hear it! And yeah, I agree. Thanks, will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 14 Sep 2009 7:11 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thanks. Will be updating asap.

    -Mel :)


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