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Reviews For Brothers of Bond
Author's Response: JAworley, Yeah I agree. It's not like Snape to risk going to Azkaban or facing a trial with the Ministry for hexing the Dursleys etc. People often forget that no matter how deserving they may be of it, Snape can't just do those things without consenquence also because he would never do that. He has more composure and sense than that. Glad you liked it. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose85, Thank-you for letting me know, makes me glad to hear that. -Mel :)
I think now would be a good time, Severus Snape, to inform the boys of your connection to them. Even in pain, Draco is still adorable. The image of the blonde boy with food he snatched up to stash away in their new room (was it the first things he saw?) was just almost adorable...in a sad, I just want to make you a real breakfast type of way. And I liked how Harry initially refused to drink the potion. So Harry, distrusting of Snape. Author's Response: Raven Knight, Yes, I agree and I too am surprisingly very pleased with the way I wrote Snape there because you're right; he does have an agenda. Thanks! Snape won't be informing them of his connection to them just yet, but all in due time. Hehe, Draco is adorable indeed. Hahaha! And it wasn't entirely to stash away although it was likely that they would. Was what the first thing he saw? The food, because if so...yes. Well Snape has stormed out to make the boys a proper meal, although it's more of a dinner than breakfast. Loved your last comment, it is funny when I think about it, but I wrote it in so naturally because I thought he would be untrusting there (well I would too if my least-favourite teacher suddenly told me to drink a strange, unnamed potion!). Thanks for your review! Will update very soon, most likely tomorrow! -Mel :)
Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: Pandora, Thank-you very much! Yeah, me too! Glad to hear it, should be updating asap. -Mel :)
I didn't think your Snape's entrance was too ordinary. Usually, he seems to have some sort of longer confrontation with the Dursley's and it usually involves some sort of punishment that he doles out to them. Your Severus is portrayed in a very Slytherin manner though because he has chosen not to curse them because it would separate him from the boys. He does have a plan when he goes in there and he has thought about the consequences, unlike some stories where he just goes in willy-nilly. I can't wait to find out how the boy's receive Snape's hospitality and news (if he chooses to tell the boys about how he is connected to them, and I hope he does because they would feel betrayed if he waited much longer--they may already feel it when he tells them now). Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: P.G, It's not so much about what Draco had chosen to eat, it was more the fact that he had what Snape thought to be as "scraps" he took the food with the intention of making the boys a proper meal :P. OMG, I sooo agree with you there, hense the way I wanted to write it. Snape is a Slytherin (as one myself I know what that is like) and there is no way that he would go in all "willy-nilly" as you humorously put it. Your comments fit what I was thinking perfectly, woo! *gives hug and Dobby hat*. I almost think I am bribing you with those items though lol. He won't be telling the boys about his connection to them just yet though. But you're right, they may feel betrayed if he waits but if it's told at the wrong time it could also be worst. Will update asap, thanks! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose85, Thanks, and don't worry...I will! -Mel :)
I do think it's a little bit rushed, but since you said the plot doesn't really start until second years, it's okay. And yeah, this chapter is common in fanfics, and I think it perhaps was very fast and a big change all suddenly, but you did a good job anyway. Keep writing, please! Author's Response: Cicci green, Thanks. I doubt you're being stupid. It wasn't explained in detail, but it was basically because even though Snape was Draco's Godfather he was unable to take the boy in at the time, so Dumbledore sent Draco to stay with Harry as the boys already had a sort of connection back then and no one else could take him in at that time. Does that make it more clear? Yes, I agree that it's a bit rushed, I disliked that factor but I agree..it's okay since the plot doesn't really start until second year. Well actually, the summer before second year. I tried to have the rescue more realistic for I do not believe that Snape would punish the Dursleys, or at the very least of not yet (since he had the boys to worry about and Azkaban wasn't appealing). Thanks! And I will. -Mel :)
Author's Response: B00kw0rm92, Yeah :P. I agree with you, about the boys and Snape. Should update soon, thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Alifromnm, Hahaha, yeah...and the wait won't be too long, should update rather soon. -Mel :) |
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