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Title: Renovations 24 Jan 2010 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that last part: "Snape felt...different." He doesn't know that's happiness yet, lol. Poor Severus...I'm sure he'll figure out what that feeling is sooner or later.

    Anyways, great chapter. I love how the misconstrued wording affected Harry and Draco. They must have felt so awful when Snape yelled at them because of the books. I think that makes your Snape seem very realistic, as he didn't mind the cleaning so much, but the books really upset him and made him flip his lid.

    Very nice chapter-I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    PG,

    Oh yay, another lovely review! :). And will he figure it out soon, he's not very experienced with this "happiness". Although it's not the major thing he's feeling...it's the starting things such as protectiveness and such.

    I do try very hard to keep Snape in character, even during moments that may be more tender. And yes, he "flipped his lid" lol I love that phrasing you used, made me laugh. But you're right, it's the books that annoyed him most, the cleaness was more of a "what the?" than anything :P. Thanks again and will update soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: Renovations 24 Jan 2010 3:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story thank you. I loathe Dumbledore and I'm sure he should think Harry should go back his reason would be the wards but really he just wants harry to be prepared to be his tool. Perhaps he could offer Severus Draco but of course Draco would refuse and that would be a nice little bit of angst as Harry tries to persuade him! As for the summer how about a bit of potion tutoring and a trip somewhere say the London eye as both like heights.
    Sorry to go on I'm sure you have much better ideas

    Author's Response:

    Fmh,

    Oh no, I love your ideas! Particularly the one about offering him Draco. I will take these all into thought, but you have inspired some events in the next chapter, Thanks!! :). I like to hear all idea, comments etc. So thanks for the review and inspiration.

    -Mel :)

Title: Renovations 21 Jan 2010 10:07 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Severus, Draco and Harry don't know it yet, but this is the start of the family they have all wanted. Thank you for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    I'm thrilled to hear that. And you're right, although they may not know it they're certainly on the path to being a family. You're welcome.

    -Mel :)

Title: Renovations 21 Jan 2010 8:34 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was so happy to see an update!!! I felt so sorry for them in the begining, but the end was so sweet! Dumbledore better let Snape keep them! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    THANKS! Glad to hear it! Thanks for the comments and review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Renovations 21 Jan 2010 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry and Draco. They made themselves so anxious for nothing, and did all that work needlessly.

    I loved the ending, and that they were so pleased with their rooms.

    I hope that Snape can make them feel loved and cared for. Nice job with the chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah, but it made things better in the end. Thanks. "Loved and cared for" may not be the stage they're up to just yet but they'll certainly be working towards it, rather soon. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)


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