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Reviews For Brothers of Bond
Anyways, great chapter. I love how the misconstrued wording affected Harry and Draco. They must have felt so awful when Snape yelled at them because of the books. I think that makes your Snape seem very realistic, as he didn't mind the cleaning so much, but the books really upset him and made him flip his lid. Very nice chapter-I can't wait to read more! -P.G. Author's Response: PG, Oh yay, another lovely review! :). And will he figure it out soon, he's not very experienced with this "happiness". Although it's not the major thing he's feeling...it's the starting things such as protectiveness and such. I do try very hard to keep Snape in character, even during moments that may be more tender. And yes, he "flipped his lid" lol I love that phrasing you used, made me laugh. But you're right, it's the books that annoyed him most, the cleaness was more of a "what the?" than anything :P. Thanks again and will update soon! -Mel :)
Sorry to go on I'm sure you have much better ideas Author's Response: Fmh, Oh no, I love your ideas! Particularly the one about offering him Draco. I will take these all into thought, but you have inspired some events in the next chapter, Thanks!! :). I like to hear all idea, comments etc. So thanks for the review and inspiration. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Alifromnm, I'm thrilled to hear that. And you're right, although they may not know it they're certainly on the path to being a family. You're welcome. -Mel :)
Author's Response: B00kw0rm92, THANKS! Glad to hear it! Thanks for the comments and review. -Mel :)
I loved the ending, and that they were so pleased with their rooms. I hope that Snape can make them feel loved and cared for. Nice job with the chappie. Author's Response: Pandora, Yeah, but it made things better in the end. Thanks. "Loved and cared for" may not be the stage they're up to just yet but they'll certainly be working towards it, rather soon. Thanks for the review. -Mel :) |
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