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Title: Methods of Prevention 15 Sep 2009 8:55 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Again, another wonderful chapter! I'd bet a chocolate galleon that Severus will have this all figured out by the middle of holiday break!

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    Thanks! Ha, I couldn't bet though because I already know. But I'd love a chocolate galleon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Methods of Prevention 15 Sep 2009 1:29 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was so cute. Snape is concerned, but would rather wash his hair, then let on that he cares!!

    Great chappie, and I'm so glad that someone is finally taking notice of their family situation. I'm glad that Snape is taking an interest in them, and that he's not being fooled. I'm glad too that he overheard that conversation, otherwise he might be fooled by their answers. But Snape is no fool!

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks! Hahahaha, oh that's funny. Wash his hair *snort*. Thank-you. Snape is certainly no fool (reminds me of a song that I thought was sooo him, but anyway), and he's certainly taking notice although he's only "curious" of course ;). He may be fooled by words but he's a leginimens don't forget (how do you spell that blasted word? I will need it later too, gah). Thanks for the review, as always!

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 15 Sep 2009 1:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that's good. Now two people suspect something's going on, and if they compare notes, maybe Harry and Draco will finally get away from those horrible Dursleys.

    I love how sneaky Snape was in observing the boys fighting, and while not deducting points from his own House, he gave them all detention.

    Nice work in developing the story. I like how Snape acts like he hates Harry, but obviously he doesn't really, even if he won't admit it to himself or Harry.

    Looking forward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    More people are becoming suspicious and perhaps they will be able to put the pieces together even though Snape sort of has but refuses to "over-react" or accept that the boys are really that mistreated and unloved for it was what he's always feared. As for them getting away from the Dursleys...hm, maybe.

    Sneaky Slytherin...that's Snape ;). And yeah, he knew Mathew wasn't all innocent. Thank-you, and you're right...he certainly doesn't hate Harry as much as he is trying to convince himself that he does hehe. Glad to hear it, will update soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Methods of Prevention 15 Sep 2009 4:11 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    You write so beautifully and it makes me wanting more...please add more soon xx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Awww, thanks!! I'm pleased to hear those comments. I will add more asap. Probably tomorrow.

    -Mel :)

Title: Methods of Prevention 15 Sep 2009 4:01 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I can't believe Dumbledore won't look anymore into it! Poor boys! I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    It's more of a case of "inaction" rather than "turning a blind eye to possibility". Dumbledore believes that the boys are actually not doing too badly, so yeah.

    Thanks, glad to hear it!

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 15 Sep 2009 2:23 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter...at leasr he knows a little of what has happened xxx

    9/10

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thanks, and yeah he does now...although he doesn't know the finer details just yet. Ooh, nice rating...thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 15 Sep 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter--I love that Snape is suspicious, but not willing to jump in head first and tackle the problem. He does that too often in fics. Really, the average person tends not to help people if they think someone else will do it instead (sadly). I have enjoyed their interactions though and am looking forward to more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Thank-you! I know what you mean, although it's not because he thinks that someone else will handle the problem but it's more of the fact that he is unsure of the direction to take it. If he gets enough clues or reasons to be concerned, you can bet that he will not be doing nothing about it. Thanks, pleased to hear it and will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 14 Sep 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, very, very interesting! Poor Harry and Draco! I feel so sorry for them. I can not wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    Hehe, glad to hear it! And yeah, I agree. Thanks, will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Rivalry and Suspicions 14 Sep 2009 7:11 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thanks. Will be updating asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hogwarts 14 Sep 2009 6:07 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    This is the first of your story I have read. I really enjoyed it!! Snape not like Harry because of his hair??? Nooooo. At least you said he won't dislike Harry for long!!! Your writing is quite good. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    Really? Thanks, glad to hear it. Draco had done Harry's hair so it looked quite different, so Snape thought he didn't actually look like a Potter clone, but now that his hair is back to normal he looks a lot more like James and Snape is annoyed for getting his hopes up. Because to Snape, if the boy looks like his father than he must be like him *grumbles*, well until he has evidence otherwise. Heh anyway yeah...thanks and I will!

    -Mel :)


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