This is interesting, but I am still wondering why Lucius and Narcissa were even there...Will you give an explanation to that? And that's rough with the two of them in the cupboard than only Harry. Talk about a tight squeeze. (Although a Gryffindor Draco would be...oh dear...quite an adventure.) I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Raven Knight,
Thanks, and yes I will certainly be explaining why Narcissa and Lucius were at the Potter's household that night for it is rather significant. The cupboard will be tight for them both indeed, but I intend to give them more space just before Hogwarts starts :P. Gryffindor Draco was something I pondered on for some time. He is yet to establish the Gryffindor traits however, but yes...he isn't brought up by his father so I myself am finding it interesting and I'm the author!
Thanks for your review etc and I will be updating in a few days at most.
-Mel :)