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Title: Circumstances Change 17 Feb 2010 4:38 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Boy, I was a bit surprised that Harry let the whole incident go so quickly, but then again, he was so lost without his brother, I don't think he could go on being angry. Still, things might not be quite the same after this between them. I guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens.

    Severus doesn't feel like brewing a potion?! Call 911! Pigs are flying! Lol, I loved that last part, unless you couldn't tell...

    Please update soon--I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Thanks. Yeah Harry is so relieved to have Draco back that he's just glad he's okay etc, however you're right...things still need a little patching up. Harry may forgive easily but he was still hrut by it and that part won't just dissappear.

    Haha, yeah Snape isn't himself. Pig livers will be flying, rather than the pigs themselves. Glad you liked it, will be updating quite soon. Thanks for the review, as always!

    -Mel :)

Title: Circumstances Change 16 Feb 2010 9:07 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I am soooooo glad Harry forgave him!!! Amazing chapter! I can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    I'm happy to hear that, hehe. Thanks and will update again soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Circumstances Change 16 Feb 2010 8:21 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad Draco is back, love the feelings that are showing between snape and the boys. Can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Missny1,

    Thanks for the review and I liked you comments. Glad to hear it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Circumstances Change 16 Feb 2010 8:21 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Draco opened up and told Harry and Severus everything that had been going through his head that caused him to run away. At least, Draco won't try a stunt like this again any time soon.

    Poor Severus! His life has been changed and there's no getting out of it. I know that he is bitter about Dumbledore's manipulations, but I think in time he will be happy that he caved under pressure.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    silverstargirl,

    Glad to hear that and yeah, either way Snape won't be letting Draco do something that again, not that he did the first time but he's more alert now hehe.

    And I agree entirely, he won't regret his decision to follow through with Dumbledore's obvious manipulation, in fact it will make things better in the end. However he will get there.

    Thanks and thank-you for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Circumstances Change 16 Feb 2010 7:32 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Best chapter yet.
    "He had to keep an eye on the raven-haired boy since he had a tendency to be indecisive between either punching Draco or hugging him. Until Snape knew which he was going to choose, the boys were not allowed within six feet of each other." Best description of Severus' thoughts. I could see these scenes so in my mind's eye. Thank you so much for the update.

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    Thanks! I loved all of your comments and I'm thrilled that you can see the scenes, I always aim for that. You're welcome.

    -Mel :)

Title: Whereabouts 15 Feb 2010 11:38 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    'Good' Harry frowned. 'Because I'm gonna punch him' He scowled and clenched his fists, startling Snape again although he hid it well.

    My favorite line of the entire story. It just sums up how frightened, upset, scared and confused Harry is. I don't blame him! Spent the morning rereading your great story. I had forgotten how much I had enjoyed it. I honestly believe that any two children in the same situation Harry and Draco found themselves would be as close as they are. I have twin boys, and even though they were brought up in a loving environment, and yes, they fussed and fought with each other, when the other one is/was threatened, the person doing it had to fight both of them!!!
    I look forward to your update!
    Severus doesn't know or realize it yet, but they are both worming their way into his heart

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    Thanks for your wonderful review! It further motivated me to write faster too so the next chapter will be up in a moment. And I was surprised that it was your favourite line, although it's so true...it does sum up how Harry is feeling. I love all you comments and your twins sound funny, but also so true...twins fight each other but no one else is allowed to fight them :P. Thanks and hehe, Severus is going to be shocked when he finds out that he actually does care about them more than just wanting to keep them alive :P. Thanks again!

    -Mel :)

Title: Whereabouts 11 Feb 2010 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so relieved that Draco is okay!!

    Aw, I love that Harry fell asleep against Snape, and Snape let him cuddle up against his chest. That was too cute.

    Good chappie! I'm really looking forward to seeing Draco's explanation.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah :P. I loev those cute scenes too, was very tempting to add more but had to keep the pace. But I agree, adorable. Thanks for the review, will update in a few days or maybe even less.

    -Mel :)

Title: Whereabouts 11 Feb 2010 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow great chapter thank goodness Draco is back but will he be content to remain I wonder? Thank you for updating

    Author's Response:

    Fmh,

    Thanks and yeah...haha oh Draco will be staying if Snape has anything to say about it!! You're welcome, will post more soon enough.

    -Mel :)

Title: Whereabouts 11 Feb 2010 9:58 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Draco has been found and that with rest he will be okay. I wonder how he will like the grilling session that is clearly coming? Where did he go? And why did he run away like that? Did he really think that the truth of his parents really changed the core of who he is?

    I do hope that Draco will be able to find acceptance in his heart that he and Harry really aren't that different. Lucius and Narcissa were attempting to get out of the life that they were stuck in. Had both of their parents lived perhaps he would have become really close friends to Harry regardless. We, of course, will never know if this is what would have happened, but the possibility is certainly there.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Silverstargirl,

    Hehe. It did say in the chapter where he went, however briefly it was mentioned. He ran away because he thought it would be better for Harry, among other reasons which I intend to detail next chapter. As for the comment about his parents...yes, at this point he is deeply concerned about that. True, perhaps he would have been close with Harry regardless, but we'll never know. The boys have a lot of understanding and discussions to sort through. Thanks for your review, gave me an idea actually for later. Thanks! Will update in the next few days or so.

    -Mel :)

Title: Whereabouts 11 Feb 2010 7:09 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm soooooo glad Draco was ok! I can't wait to see him explain! Hopefully Harry will forgive him quickly! Can not wait to see what's next!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    Yeah, will be interesting. Harry will forigve him, but quickly? Hm. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)


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