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Title: What Morning Brings 04 Oct 2009 12:24 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! Wonderful as always! I feel so sorry for the boys. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    B00kw0rm92,

    Thanks, glad to hear it. And yeah they've had it rough.

    -Mel :)

Title: What Morning Brings 03 Oct 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL!! That was too cute. I love how Snape worried about the boys.

    Nice work. I can't wait to see more bonding between them.

    Draco as a daredevil Gryffindor, should be very interesting to read.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Did you double-review with this one? I think I already answered this review and then it still comes up on my "unanswered list" hm. Let me know if I didn't though.

    -Mel :)

Title: What Morning Brings 03 Oct 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL!! That was too cute. I love how Snape worried about the boys.

    Nice work. I can't wait to see more bonding between them.

    Draco as a daredevil Gryffindor, should be very interesting to read.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks! :D. Snape with two gryffindors in his care, yes "worried" will be a common occurance. Bonding will comence quite soon. Draco is certainly much more fun to write as a Gryffindor, I have several very entertaining situations planned. Although a majority of them will be for when they return to Hogwarts.

    -Mel :)

Title: What Morning Brings 03 Oct 2009 1:05 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great work...please add more soon xx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thanks, I will. It's probably gonna end up as quite a long fic :P

     -Mel :)

Title: The Knight in Black Robes 29 Sep 2009 9:50 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I have read this and just wanted to say great work

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thank-you for letting me know, makes me glad to hear that.

    -Mel :)

Title: The Knight in Black Robes 27 Sep 2009 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your Snape-to-the-rescue maneuver here. He doesn't just float in like a ray of sunshine, but comes in meaning business! I also like how you did not have him go all crazy at the Dursleys. The man has one agenda: get the boys to safety and out of this house. And you showed that well.

    I think now would be a good time, Severus Snape, to inform the boys of your connection to them.

    Even in pain, Draco is still adorable. The image of the blonde boy with food he snatched up to stash away in their new room (was it the first things he saw?) was just almost adorable...in a sad, I just want to make you a real breakfast type of way. And I liked how Harry initially refused to drink the potion. So Harry, distrusting of Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Raven Knight,

    Yes, I agree and I too am surprisingly very pleased with the way I wrote Snape there because you're right; he does have an agenda. Thanks!

    Snape won't be informing them of his connection to them just yet, but all in due time. Hehe, Draco is adorable indeed. Hahaha! And it wasn't entirely to stash away although it was likely that they would. Was what the first thing he saw? The food, because if so...yes. Well Snape has stormed out to make the boys a proper meal, although it's more of a dinner than breakfast.  Loved your last comment, it is funny when I think about it, but I wrote it in so naturally because I thought he would be untrusting there (well I would too if my least-favourite teacher suddenly told me to drink a strange, unnamed potion!). Thanks for your review! Will update very soon, most likely tomorrow!

    -Mel :)

Title: Hedwig's Call 27 Sep 2009 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, my dear, I have been completely lax in my reviewing. I do apologize.

    Even without this chapter/misupload, the story was still understandable and perfectly fine. It was nice (well, not nice, mind you) to actually see how they became injured. Poor boys.

    As always, looking forward to more. This is such an interesting, creative concept.

    Author's Response:

    Raven Knight,

    It's okay :) I forgive you, how could I not?

    Yeah, I assume it was although I had hoped to have the hedwig part as a cliffhanger (even though it wouldn't be hard to guess where she was going!) but oh well, things still fit and yeah. I agree and I did not like "causing" them pain.

    Pleased to hear it and yay, you think so? Interesting and creative? I'm happy now, as always after reading one of your reviews.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hedwig's Call 27 Sep 2009 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, so I actually didn't think there was anything amiss without this chapter. There was actually a lot of intrigue and mystery about what had happened and I found it rather suspenseful because I didn't know what Snape was going to see when he got in the boys' room. It does fit in with the story just fine and it was a good chapter, I just thought you were going to explain it all later, lol.

    I'm looking forward to more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    That was the only lucky think about my mis-upload...the fact that it didn't seem to change much other than to give information about what had happened. Heh, I considered it but I really wanted to write the more emotional value to this chapter and add the bit about hedwig. Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Hedwig's Call 27 Sep 2009 2:22 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, the only way this was bearable to read, was because I knew that they were going to be rescued in the next chapter!!

    Great job as usual. I can't wait for next chappie. I'm so glad they're with Snape now!

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah, I suppose that would be true. Thanks! I'm pleased to hear and I too amd glad they're with Sev.

    -Mel :)

Title: The Knight in Black Robes 25 Sep 2009 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You did a great job with Snape's rescue!!! I'm so glad that he was able to save them.

    Can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thank-you very much! Yeah, me too! Glad to hear it, should be updating asap.

    -Mel :)


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