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Reviews For Brothers of Bond
I didn't think your Snape's entrance was too ordinary. Usually, he seems to have some sort of longer confrontation with the Dursley's and it usually involves some sort of punishment that he doles out to them. Your Severus is portrayed in a very Slytherin manner though because he has chosen not to curse them because it would separate him from the boys. He does have a plan when he goes in there and he has thought about the consequences, unlike some stories where he just goes in willy-nilly. I can't wait to find out how the boy's receive Snape's hospitality and news (if he chooses to tell the boys about how he is connected to them, and I hope he does because they would feel betrayed if he waited much longer--they may already feel it when he tells them now). Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: P.G, It's not so much about what Draco had chosen to eat, it was more the fact that he had what Snape thought to be as "scraps" he took the food with the intention of making the boys a proper meal :P. OMG, I sooo agree with you there, hense the way I wanted to write it. Snape is a Slytherin (as one myself I know what that is like) and there is no way that he would go in all "willy-nilly" as you humorously put it. Your comments fit what I was thinking perfectly, woo! *gives hug and Dobby hat*. I almost think I am bribing you with those items though lol. He won't be telling the boys about his connection to them just yet though. But you're right, they may feel betrayed if he waits but if it's told at the wrong time it could also be worst. Will update asap, thanks! -Mel :)
-P.G. Author's Response: P.G, Certainly can't make any promises there, sorry. Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose85, Thanks, and don't worry...I will! -Mel :)
I do think it's a little bit rushed, but since you said the plot doesn't really start until second years, it's okay. And yeah, this chapter is common in fanfics, and I think it perhaps was very fast and a big change all suddenly, but you did a good job anyway. Keep writing, please! Author's Response: Cicci green, Thanks. I doubt you're being stupid. It wasn't explained in detail, but it was basically because even though Snape was Draco's Godfather he was unable to take the boy in at the time, so Dumbledore sent Draco to stay with Harry as the boys already had a sort of connection back then and no one else could take him in at that time. Does that make it more clear? Yes, I agree that it's a bit rushed, I disliked that factor but I agree..it's okay since the plot doesn't really start until second year. Well actually, the summer before second year. I tried to have the rescue more realistic for I do not believe that Snape would punish the Dursleys, or at the very least of not yet (since he had the boys to worry about and Azkaban wasn't appealing). Thanks! And I will. -Mel :)
Author's Response: B00kw0rm92, Yeah :P. I agree with you, about the boys and Snape. Should update soon, thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Alifromnm, Hahaha, yeah...and the wait won't be too long, should update rather soon. -Mel :)
Author's Response: S.S, Good, I'm pleased to hear that and thanks. Should update soon! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Salazarschild, Yeah, that depends on a variety of things, but it will have a happy-ish ending eventually of course :P. -Mel :)
Maybe Snape will come to rescue them! Great chappie. I'm glad that Mathew got suspended for hurting the owls, the big bully. Author's Response: Pandora, Yeah, I wouldn't either...with good reason. Perhaps he will. Mathew is a jerk alright, got partially of what he deserved. Next year will be interesting. Thanks! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose95, Thank-you, I'm glad to hear it. -Mel :) |
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