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Reviews For More Than Meets the Eye
Author's Response: You'll find out, you'll find out! *giggles* So many questions, but I'm glad you like the chapter. TftR.
PS-I'd love some chocolate frogs :) Author's Response: *gives a handful of them* Sorry, but I'm running out of frogs. You'll have to be glad with half-rations for that sweet. I'm glad you like the chapter, and I'm finding I'm getting more neutral answers then yes or no. That's funny. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
But I am very much in favor of longer chapters of any flavor. Can't wait to see Snape's reaction to Harry's wounds. How long until the bullies are found? Author's Response: That might take awhile. They aren't going to reveal themselves if they find he's been to an authority figure (if you know Sev, you'll know why). You'll have to wait and see Sev's reaction though. Glad you liked the chapter, TftR.
Also, I did want to mention that you are doing a much better job of holding my interest now that you are updating sooner. Getting better. ;) Hope that helps! I also added a rating this time, I forgot it on the last. MJ Author's Response: Well, I was thinking of increasing the length, regardless. But if you want a 2.5k+ word length, I'll have to drop the Last Time bit. I'm much more comftorable at the 1k-1.5k chapter wordlength. I'm glad you are getting more interested, and I do update when I can. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
I'm fine either way with the "last time" thing. Author's Response: Okay, so far gotten some for and some against. I hope you'll like the next chapter, and I'm glad you liked this one. TftR.
Thanks J Author's Response: *snickers* I update when and how long as I can. I'm glad you liked the way I was slow to reveal things. I think it ups the satisfaction of when it's finally revealed. TftR, hope you like the next chapter.
I like the Last time thing... of course I wouldn't mind longer chapter, but it could be a little be confusing without the Last Time.... but that's only my opinion, and I don't really have a preference... This chapter wasn't too short as well, and you updated so soon, so thanks and great job! Author's Response: Hmm, so it really depends, huh? Well, I'll try to get longer chapters in, but I'm using the library's computers for my posts now. Not alot of time to write stories. Glad you liked the chapter, TftR.
In fact, that is really the only critique that I have for you. Most of my other good stories are at least half again as long if not more chapter-wise than yours are. Yours is kind of teetering on the edge of keeping me interested becuase of length and time between updates vs. action occurring in the chapter. Keep it up, it's finally starting to really get interesting! And bring in more Sev/Harry relationship development! MJ Author's Response: Well now that Draco's gotten Harry to come foward, it won't take so much time between chapters. I've finally gotten over the hump in this chapter, if you will. I hope you liked the chapter, and will like the next one. TftR.
Author's Response: *giggle* Better then some of my cliffies though, don't you think? I'm very glad you liked the chapter, and we'll see how the vote goes about the "last time" technique. TftR.
Bravo Draco and Severus. Well handled--you kept Harry from bolting. (poor guy) Looking forward to your next update. V. Author's Response: Glad you liked. *chuckle* Indeed, poor Harry. He's a deer caught in headlights right now. TftR, glad you liked the chapter. |
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