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Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 3:49 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait till Severus sees what was done to Harry. I think there will be some very petrified students and one very dead Vernon Dursley. Great job! You can leave the Last Time technique in there if it helps you focus.

    Author's Response: *nods* How do you like your Vernon, original or extra crispy? I'm glad you don't care one way or another. It helps to know that there are people who are neutral about it. I'm sorry I haven't read your stories lately, but I've been busy with school and getting these chapters up. TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Ebily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Another great chapter! Can't wait for more!

    As for the 'last time' thing... I don't really look at it at all because you update so frequently (yay!) that I can usually still remember what happened last time. So I would say it's unnecessary but not bad or annoying or anything. Except maybe in deceiving me as to how long your chapter *really* is...

    Author's Response: *snickers* That's true. I will try to make longer chapters. But it's hard to be creative when you're on a time limit (self-imposed or otherwise). I'm glad you like the story, TftR, hope you'll like the next one.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 1:56 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    Heh, okay. You won't have to wait for long. I'll update soon. Glad you like and TftR.

Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 12:35 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh good Draco cornered him and found out. Does Snape realize the eye is fake, it's not really mentioned. And would the Dursley's have gotten him a fake eye? how did he get it? Just nosey...

    Author's Response: You'll find out, you'll find out! *giggles* So many questions, but I'm glad you like the chapter. TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 12:34 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! grr... evil dursleys (but then, we already knew that:) how dare they hurt my precious harry! I don't particularly mind the "Last Times" but I also don't mind just going to the last chapter, so either way is fine for me.

    PS-I'd love some chocolate frogs :)

    Author's Response: *gives a handful of them* Sorry, but I'm running out of frogs. You'll have to be glad with half-rations for that sweet. I'm glad you like the chapter, and I'm finding I'm getting more neutral answers then yes or no. That's funny. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 12:00 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't mind the "last time" thing.
    But I am very much in favor of longer chapters of any flavor.
    Can't wait to see Snape's reaction to Harry's wounds. How long until the bullies are found?

    Author's Response: That might take awhile. They aren't going to reveal themselves if they find he's been to an authority figure (if you know Sev, you'll know why). You'll have to wait and see Sev's reaction though. Glad you liked the chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 11:30 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Just a point of clarification, the Last Time thing is fine with me; it could get helpful particularly if you have a longer wait between chapters. However, if it is a trade-off between chapter length and Last Timers, I'd definitely for dropping it in favor of length. But if you're going to increase the length regardless, I'd say keep it in. After reading some other reviews, I realize I may have read this wrong.

    Also, I did want to mention that you are doing a much better job of holding my interest now that you are updating sooner. Getting better. ;)

    Hope that helps! I also added a rating this time, I forgot it on the last.
    MJ

    Author's Response: Well, I was thinking of increasing the length, regardless. But if you want a 2.5k+ word length, I'll have to drop the Last Time bit. I'm much more comftorable at the 1k-1.5k chapter wordlength. I'm glad you are getting more interested, and I do update when I can. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 10:05 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Poor little Harry! I hope he sees that they will protect him (they will, right?)! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    I'm fine either way with the "last time" thing.

    Author's Response: Okay, so far gotten some for and some against. I hope you'll like the next chapter, and I'm glad you liked this one. TftR.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 9:56 pm
Reviewer: jenny-in-uk (Signed) [Report This]
    really good story. Well written so far. I think the slow reveal is a good mechanism. Please continue and update frequently, or with longer chapters (that's your choice, we don't expect you chained to the computer).
    Thanks
    J

    Author's Response: *snickers* I update when and how long as I can. I'm glad you liked the way I was slow to reveal things. I think it ups the satisfaction of when it's finally revealed. TftR, hope you like the next chapter.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 9:54 pm
Reviewer: SSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Draco! I liked him very much in this chapter, and of course I liked Harry's reaction.... so this is why he has a glass eye?
    I like the Last time thing... of course I wouldn't mind longer chapter, but it could be a little be confusing without the Last Time.... but that's only my opinion, and I don't really have a preference...
    This chapter wasn't too short as well, and you updated so soon, so thanks and great job!

    Author's Response: Hmm, so it really depends, huh? Well, I'll try to get longer chapters in, but I'm using the library's computers for my posts now. Not alot of time to write stories. Glad you liked the chapter, TftR.

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