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Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    I think in favor of longer chapters that you should take our the Last Time. Longer chapters are always wonderful. :)

    In fact, that is really the only critique that I have for you. Most of my other good stories are at least half again as long if not more chapter-wise than yours are. Yours is kind of teetering on the edge of keeping me interested becuase of length and time between updates vs. action occurring in the chapter.

    Keep it up, it's finally starting to really get interesting! And bring in more Sev/Harry relationship development!
    MJ

    Author's Response: Well now that Draco's gotten Harry to come foward, it won't take so much time between chapters. I've finally gotten over the hump in this chapter, if you will. I hope you liked the chapter, and will like the next one. TftR.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it when authors use the "last time" technique, it saves me having to go back and read what happened at the end of the last chapter to refresh my memory. Please keep using it. Bye the way, not very nice leaving us hanging at the end of the chapter!! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: *giggle* Better then some of my cliffies though, don't you think? I'm very glad you liked the chapter, and we'll see how the vote goes about the "last time" technique. TftR.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep the "last time" -- I always find it useful--I don't have to go back and fully re-read the previous chapter.

    Bravo Draco and Severus. Well handled--you kept Harry from bolting. (poor guy)

    Looking forward to your next update.

    V.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked. *chuckle* Indeed, poor Harry. He's a deer caught in headlights right now. TftR, glad you liked the chapter.
Title: Discovery 30 Nov 2009 8:29 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, a bit longer than normal, so that's good. I'm glad the "last time" was shorter too, you really don't need it, because it was taking up a LOT of your space. I liked the chapter but it could be better, we know Severus knows something off, but what does he notice from chapters back?

    Author's Response: You'll just have to wait. I like keeping things in the dark about how a character views things. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter. TftR.
Title: Not My Day 29 Nov 2009 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh My, who has it out for Harry this time? Poor guy really can't catch a break--but maybe having a subborn Draco around nosing into his problems will be a good thing--especially if it means Harry gets draged to his Head of House.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: That's true. I really like the stories that have Harry and Draco being friends. And having Harry in Slytherin would mean Draco would be the only likely one to befriend him first. I'm surprised no ones said poor attackers. I'd be nervous to attack a Slytherin with that particular Head of House in residence. Glad you liked, hope you like the next one. TftR.
Title: Not My Day 29 Nov 2009 2:39 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter... Can't wait for more... Wonder what Sev is going to do to help Harry

    Author's Response: Well now that will just have to remain secret. I never give away my next chapter or two if I can help it. Glad you liked and hope you like the next one. TftR.
Title: Not My Day 29 Nov 2009 3:39 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, his life is never easy.

    Looking forward to chapter 6!

    Author's Response: Life isn't easy period. Harry's just one of the ones who has it more difficult then most. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
Title: Not My Day 29 Nov 2009 3:00 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor, poor Harry! I can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Mm...yes, poor Harry. But have you ever considered poor attackers once Snape gets ahold of them? TftR.
Title: Not My Day 29 Nov 2009 12:31 am
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter, I've been enjoying your story.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter and story, hope you'll enjoy the next one. TftR.
Title: Not My Day 28 Nov 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: SSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    You're right, this chapter isn't short, and I'm so glad you updated again so soon! I like the part with Snape and Dumbledore, and I can't wait to find put what Draco wants.... and even though I still have a lot of questions (I know, I am a very curious girl), I will just wait to read more...
    I love this story, it is getting better with every chapter!

    Author's Response: Heh. Very glad you liked. Glad to hear you'll wait until I update before asking questions. It saves me the effort of having to say I can't answer. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.

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