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Reviews For More Than Meets the Eye
In fact, that is really the only critique that I have for you. Most of my other good stories are at least half again as long if not more chapter-wise than yours are. Yours is kind of teetering on the edge of keeping me interested becuase of length and time between updates vs. action occurring in the chapter. Keep it up, it's finally starting to really get interesting! And bring in more Sev/Harry relationship development! MJ Author's Response: Well now that Draco's gotten Harry to come foward, it won't take so much time between chapters. I've finally gotten over the hump in this chapter, if you will. I hope you liked the chapter, and will like the next one. TftR.
Author's Response: *giggle* Better then some of my cliffies though, don't you think? I'm very glad you liked the chapter, and we'll see how the vote goes about the "last time" technique. TftR.
Bravo Draco and Severus. Well handled--you kept Harry from bolting. (poor guy) Looking forward to your next update. V. Author's Response: Glad you liked. *chuckle* Indeed, poor Harry. He's a deer caught in headlights right now. TftR, glad you liked the chapter.
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait. I like keeping things in the dark about how a character views things. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter. TftR.
Looking forward to your next update. V. Author's Response: That's true. I really like the stories that have Harry and Draco being friends. And having Harry in Slytherin would mean Draco would be the only likely one to befriend him first. I'm surprised no ones said poor attackers. I'd be nervous to attack a Slytherin with that particular Head of House in residence. Glad you liked, hope you like the next one. TftR.
Author's Response: Well now that will just have to remain secret. I never give away my next chapter or two if I can help it. Glad you liked and hope you like the next one. TftR.
Looking forward to chapter 6! Author's Response: Life isn't easy period. Harry's just one of the ones who has it more difficult then most. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
Author's Response: Mm...yes, poor Harry. But have you ever considered poor attackers once Snape gets ahold of them? TftR.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter and story, hope you'll enjoy the next one. TftR.
I love this story, it is getting better with every chapter! Author's Response: Heh. Very glad you liked. Glad to hear you'll wait until I update before asking questions. It saves me the effort of having to say I can't answer. Hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR. |
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