| Title: Au Contraire
| 18 Jun 2013 3:19 pm
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| Reviewer: BernadineQuinn (Anonymous)
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AWWW!! I don't think I've told you that for a while. So sorry! Real life sucks sometimes and gets in the way XD But this was teh uber cute!
I liked the talk between Remus and Harry at the beginning, and how saw that Sev's teething. Ouch! But he'll get over it soon enough. Plus he's got Harry anyway. He's good to go! ^-^
And the whole Dumbledore thing was really interesting. I'm afraid my minds a little foggy when it comes to them,so I think I'm going to go research them again. But you actually made me feel sorry for Albus in this one...if just for a moment. That's pretty good considering I don't like the old coot. But you're doing really well!!
The end was adorable with Sev! XD I LOVE that he wanted to give the Headmaster a ballon! So cute! And then he tells Albus to smile and be happy? ADORABLE!!!! And he wants to be just like Harry. ^-^ That made me happy. Ooooo!!! If you had a NEW generation of Marauders with Sev in the mix that would be SOOOOOO cool!!
One little mistake though: "The teenager looked down at gaped at the baby in his arms." I think you need to turn "at" into "and". It didn't make sense to me, but then again, it's late and it could just be me.
I can't wait to see where this is going! Another good one Winger!!
"Then he heard the most angelic sound in the world: baby Snape laughed at him."- HOLY CRAP!!! That's so cute! Oh my, Winger-Hawk, this is just about the cutest thing EVER!! Baby Snape blowing raspberries? ADORABLE!!XD But how mean of you to have the old Snape still in there, knowing and having everyone treat him like a baby...even though he is one. I think I'd cry too! Aw, he's so cute!!
I love your take on how the books probably SHOULD have ended...without the de-aging part maybe... but the Snape wanting it all to end is very believable. I mean, first he lived and focused on Lily, then he focused on saving Lily, and then when she died he focused on protecting the only part of Lily left in the world: Harry. So naturally when the threat was gone, he'd want everything to be over. Poor man. :(
But I LOVE Harry in this. Very good. Mad at Dumbles (the git) and warry of the other professor, and forgiving Snape (^-^) the way it all should be! This is just great! I'm only sorry I didn't start reading before! I'm off to the next chappie!
| Title: Au Contraire
| 16 Sep 2009 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Just found your story and love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Haha, wonderful to read, Mila
| Title: Au Contraire
| 12 Sep 2009 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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Oh I definitely want to read more of this. I have read the stories by Dramagirl007 and love them to pieces. I am looking forward to reading more of yours. Update soon please? :)
Oh wow, this story is awesome. I'm glad that I have inspired you with my story Harry Potter and the Deaged Potions Professor which is on Fanfiction.net and not here yet. It surprised me when I saw my pen name up there. Thanks for that because now I feel special. :) Keep up the good work with this story and please update ASAP. :)
Baby Snape!!!! Awwwww... I love this kind of fluffy story! I especially like that he has his memories, so there will be lots of interaction with him trying to get his opinions understood!
I look forward to reading more.
Oh, this should be too funny! Baby Snape is so cute. I love how he blows raspberries at everyone.
Nice start. I can't wait to see how baby Snape will drive Harry crazy!
I wanted to tell I like this story! It's only the first chapter but it's quite original (at least I don't remember any where Snape regress to childhood but still has his memory) And I love how Harry is still respecting him. Also I loved when Harry asked which one Severus would forgive more easily. Also that Harry it's the only one who can traslate Severus thoughts.
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