LOL! Well...I certainly love your reviews just as much as it appears you love my chapters! :D I love long reviews. I makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside! :P Lol! Which is good, considering it's cold outside right now. But that's neither here nor there...

ANYWAY! :P Thank you so much for your kind words. And you were indeed correct-- "neural pathways" was indeed the clue. It kind of stuck out of the paragraph like a sore thumb, I think. It was such an unusual phrase. Ha, ha! But correct you were, and I think you have a good idea now where Sev is heading. 

By the way, I actually drew a rough sketch of "Mr. Parchment and Mrs. Quill" and uploaded it onto my website this morning. I forgot to mention that in the author's notes at the end. My mistake. But anyway, I tend to doodle when I don't want to pay attention in class, so anyone who's interested should check up on that site for any additional pictures or schematics if they want any. I think the most detailed drawing I made so far is for a chapter I have yet to upload, and it's for Harry's house in Godric's Hollow. I'll try my hand at actually drawing some scenes from the stories once I find a quick enough method for doing so. 

But...yeah. Thanks for your opinion about Ginny. When you mentioned overdoing her yesterday, I got a bit self-conscious and started looking back at my chapters to see if I actually did any of that, and...I don't really think I did. It's actually a good thing that I have that in my mind now so I can watch how I write her. Because I certainly don't want her to end up in either of the extremes either. I've tried to portray her as the girl who keeps Harry grounded but let's him fly as much as he wants as well. You know what I mean? That's what I was aiming for with Ginny. She gives and she takes. She and Harry (the way I see it) have a very good, open relationship where they can talk about their problems (in their own way), and they work together to get over the hurdles in life. She's indulging, for sure, but she doesn't indulge TOO much. The same thing goes with Harry. That's what I was aiming for with the two of them. Because their relationship with each other and with Sev is going to become a very vital element to this story, especially when we come to a rather crucial part in the plot (which I have yet to write, but am hoping to be done with by the end of...this week, best case scenario).  The virtual climax of the story. 

But enough of that for now! ;D Hehehehehe! My outline lists the tentative chapter title as "Here, There Be Dragons". Make of that what you will. Lol! :P 

And finally, the two comments I really wanted to make: Firstly, I think I know what's wrong! I have the feeling it has to do with your internet connection. The page doesn't load completely sometimes (which is why when you click on it, the end magically pops up). You either have a slow internet connection (nothing to be ashamed of, I assure you), or a lot of people are using the same network as you are, therefore the bandwidth is close to its limit and your page loads slower (common in dorms, where all the college students use the same connection). Try checking out the green loading bar at the bottom of the page. If it's still there (and still green), that means your page is still loading. Hitting "refresh" could help it load faster in some cases. :) Hope that helps! 

And Teddy. Ah, Teddy, Teddy, Teddy. :-) Teddy will end up playing a crucial role in the evolution of Sev's and Remus' relationship. And Teddy will indeed end up playing a crucial role in the rest of Sev's life as well. But...alas, we're still at the beginning. They're friends. And just like friends tend to do, there will be ups and there will be downs. But the downs won't start until Sev grows so attached to Harry and Ginny, he starts getting possessive of them. Case in point, I'm about to start a chapter right now where Harry pays just a little TOO much attention to his godson and Sev...well, he doesn't really like that very much. Lol! But that's not til later. ;P

Until next time! :D

Goodnight!