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Reviews For Serendipity
And now Sev can crawl; good for him! But oh, Harry and Ginny are going to have to watch him now!! Who KNOWS what kinda trouble he'll get into later? It will be adorable no doubt, but still! And now Sev sees Lily in the clouds. *sobs* That's so sad! I always feel bad for him because of how much he loved her and didn't get her and...and, yeah...I'm just glad that he's getting a second chance! ^-^ Another goodie Winger! You got a ringer! (I'm hopelessly infatuated with rhyming...sorry about that) XD
cute ending, and next is is quarters >_> oh boy hope its not too scary. on to next chapter!
Author's Response: Not quite. Sev's not losing any of his memories, but his behavior will be explained within a one or two chapters, so don't worry. And Sev's not sitting upright yet. He's sitting in the tripod position. That is, he's leaning on his arms while he sits. It's the precursor to sitting fully upright. Thanks for the review! :-)
I LOVED this chapter! It was simply adorable! Ok, at the beginning I did got a bit bored while Harry read, though it was interesting the story of Elson and I bet you have more than one reason to have it in there, I couldn't help but laugh when you described what Sev was doing at the moment! LOL! Oh, yes, his Wizard Cheerios were way more interesting than learning about the invention of a POTION! LOL! Is it me, or as time progresses, Sev turns more and more into a baby? I mean, it's as Snape is mostly not there anymore...I mean, he IS but he ISN'T. Am I explaining myself? Moving on...not so much. Ok, Sev biting Harry's finger was HILARIOUS! My God! He just got to put the shiny ring into his mouth. And Harry wouldn't notice or care...I mean, he was reading something. So, teething, uh? I don't know much about babies, since I'm the youngest in my family and have no children myself, but I have heard that is quite the months for most babies, since they have pain and are uncomfortable, and even get diarrhea; but the snitch toy made me smile. On other things, Harry called, I believe for the first time, Sev 'son'. I mean, he had done it before, calling him 'my child', or 'my boy', or when he explained why he called him cub, but I believe he never had told him 'MY son' before. Calling a boy, 'son', is kind of common, but 'my son', I think it is a BIG difference. And yet, Sev didn't even notice about it. He was just enjoying the sensation in his gums. XD The crawling scene. Oh my! Harry crawling. Now that's quite amusing, and seeing how Sev tricked him into it. LOL But Sev slithering over, that was funny. "That is completely unfair! I play a harmless joke and he takes my teething toy away! I thought Gryffindors were supposed to live by fairness and justice and all that. He paused. Or were those the Hufflepuffs?" That particular part made me giggle madly. I seriously loved it. It's like a combination of Baby Sev and Snape! I loved it! Now, the cub has learned to crawl, and I just wonder if he'll get into some mischeif with this new life skill...hmm... Anyway, moving on. The last scene with Ginny was so sweet. And the kiss...another proof of my prior theory, at least to me, that Sev is turning more and more into a baby. I mean, I REALLY doubt SNAPE would kiss Ginny, even on her cheek, not to mention on her lips. And to me, it looked more like a baby kissing his mommy. Which made me go all, "awww!" I loved the last scene, with Ginny and Sev looking over at the clouds. Actually, it reminded me of me and my mom since we used to do that a lot when i was a kid! But back to the story, that scene was so adorable! And then Harry joining in, aw! Made me grin like a madman...or madwoman! "“You want to know what I spy up there?” Harry asked, smiling down at the two people he had his arm wrapped around." That little phrase, the last part about the arm wrapped about just made me think that it is more like his HEART is wrapped around them...he is falling in love with his little family and I don't see him giving up on them...EVER. And Sev's reaction to the thoughts about his past and the present just makes me think that he is getting more and more attached to the situation. He might not LOVE it, granted, but at least he LIKES it...a bit, maybe, but the point is that he likes it. And last but not least...Lily?! Is she going to have a big part on this story? Well, I'm SO looking forward to next chapter! SOOOO, SO MUCH! And 50 chapters! I'm going crazy! That's SO awasome! By the way...I wouldn't care if you had more. At least you KNOW where your story is going to. And it IS an amazing story! So, this is chap 8, it means we've got 42 chaps to go! YEAY!!!!! Will you be posting a chapter a day? I hope so, and if by any means you just HAD to post two or three in a day, you know, becuase you HAD to, no one would be mad either. Or four chaps...I mean...I wouldn't care. That's for sure. And you’re writing to chap 44? WOW! Ok…I’m doing a strange dancing/wiggling in my chair…I’m just excited about it!!!! So…UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW, please???? Oh, and before I forget. About the music…yeah, I get what you say. NO, I don’t listen to the ‘nights’ noises, seeing as I live in a city in a country with tropical weather, meaning summers are HOT and with LOTS of moisture and NO wind…but when I go up to the mountains…wow, that’s something at night. I mean, the frogs and crickets, and then the owls and other night animals, and to top it all the wind rustling the trees around softly…my God, I get it now! And you are right, I’ve found songs that have been more than songs on some moments in my life. It’s like they are giving me an advice on what to do at that moment. So, keep on writing like you’re doing until now. YOU, milady, are doing a magnificent job. Ok, better go now. I think this is the longest review I’ve done until now. Yet, I’m sure you won’t get mad at all! XD See ya soon! GM PS. Before I forget, thanks for answering my questions!! XD
Author's Response: He will age like a normal baby. The potion just reduced his size, not his ability to age effectively. Most of this story, actually, revolves around his developmental milestones from 5 months to 17 months, among other things. And...I want to say I'll be updating daily. I'd love to. If I finish writing this story before my posting catches up with it, then...I would say yes, I'll be updating daily. Otherwise, it'll be until my posting catches up with the pace of my writing. Thanks for the review! :-)
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