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Reviews For Serendipity
I just have one question though. Why doesn't Sev know what a horcrux is in this? He should. I mean at the beginning he doesn't seem to know what it is, but in the middle, when they're talking about Tom's diary, he seems to understand there. Was it just the baby in him at the moment? Aww! The ending made me sad, yet happy. He distroyed the box and got Lily's picture, but he can never have Lily. She's dead. Will he ever be able to let go and love someone else when he gets older? Or will he forever love her and only her? I'd be really sad for him if he had two life times where he couldn't be happy and didn't get to love anyone like he'd loved Lily... I think he deserves someone. Unless he'd someday marry Lily's granddaughter, Harry's daughter?? That's kind weird to think about... Well, I know what you mean about typing too fast that your brain doesn't register mistakes. Mine does that ALL the time. My story almost alway has like ten mistakes I don't catch because I know what it's supposed to say and I just don't see it. But I did find one booboo: "Slytherins are most likely the one ones who" you have one too many ones (ha!) Another wonderful chappie, my dear Winger-dawn. I'll read again tomorrow!! Author's Response: Thank you once again for taking the time to review! :) It's highly appreciated, considering I'm a person who reads a story, loves it to pieces, but almost never reviews. :P That's why I appreciate all my reviewers so much. :) To answer your question, Sev doesn't know what a Horcrux is. Like, period. He doesn't. Um...And I wrote it that way because when I was reading the books, I noticed that Dumbledore never told Severus what a horcrux was. Or at least...I don't think he did. Voldemort would NEVER tell his Death Eaters what a horcrux is because he's the type that would keep the secrets of immortality from his followers. Dumbledore just told Snape that a piece of Voldemort's soul was lodged in Harry, and that's all Snape knew about that situation. He didn't know that Harry was technically termed a "horcrux". It was Harry who knew the implications of Dumbledore's statement. The Headmaster, to my recollection, never actually said the word "horcrux" during his and Snape's conversations. Um...during the story, the part when they're talking about Riddle's Diary, that was Sev reacting to the notion of being associated with Voldemort's soul, which Harry mentions in the previous line. Sev has yet to associate the term "horcrux" to the notion that it houses a piece of a person's soul. When he starts talking about never feeling clean again if that ever happened to him, he's only talking about that notion. He has yet to find out he's also talking about being associated with horcruxes. Uh...anyway, yeah. I think that was the part you were referring to. Did that answer your question? Or did I just ramble about the completely wrong part? :-P Let me know. Thanks once again for pointing out that typo. It's supposed to say "...the ONLY ones..." So now I have two things to fix the next time I update. Lol! It's all good. Um...about Lily. LoL! That last comment is both amusing and a little disconcerting, considering Harry and Ginny are practically, um...adopting Sev and stuff. She would technically be his adoptive sister. :-S Uh...yeah. LOL! But anyway...back to Lily...Chapter 12 (as well as little bits and pieces scattered throughout this story) should pique your interest in that regard. Um...yeah. That's all I'm saying about that. ;-P Some reviewers have already started guessing in regards to it. I want to see who actually gets it right first. Oh yeah! And Chapter 15 is rather Lily-centric as well. Er...yeah. I think that's all I wanted to say about that. :-P Ha, ha! Happy reading! (And thanks once again for the review!)
Great story!
I wonder what the returning Slytherins' will think of their remolded common room. Lily also in this chatper :) I wonder if it means Sev can let go somewhat of his past after his friendship with Lily was broken.
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