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Title: A Fortunate Accident 28 Oct 2009 2:31 pm
Reviewer: Buchling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    There is one thing about your story I can't quite get used to: Harry and Ginny act way to grown up. They are 17 and 16 years old. They are teenagers but they behave like they're ten years older. It gives your story a phoney feeling.
    I can't describe it any better, but I think you should have made them older or characterise them more true to their age.

    Author's Response:

    I respect your opinion. However, as an anthropologist, my argument would be this: What defines the behavior of a "regular" teenager? What defines "regular" to begin with? One must take into account what culture said person was raised in, the kind of family they were raised with, what values they were raised with, the circumstances surrounding one's life, one's thought patterns, one's coping mechanisms, one's system of beliefs. The list can be quite endless, actually. Acting "true to one's age" is quite relative. The discrepancies can be astounding, even if one observes two teenagers of the same age, class, ethnicity, religion, and educational background in the same school! How one acts depends on a multitude of things. It doesn't matter how old one is. Personally, when I was 16/17 this is EXACTLY how I acted and thought. And I hadn't even gone through the traumatic events that Harry and Ginny had just gone through in the course of their young lives. If you would like a justification, then I would say that this is how they coped with the stress of their daily lives. They, like many young people who have had to live through a terrifying, devastating war, have chosen to protect themselves by "growing up" (as some societies in the modern-day western world choose to put it). Their priorities are entirely different than a "regular" (read, "stereotypical") muggle British teenager's priorities. Have that, if you will. Personally, as an author, as an anthropologist, and as a former/current misunderstood American teenager, I have NO definition of "normal" or "regular" or acting "true to one's age". I believe that the "general opinion" that society has of teenagers today merely consists of prejudices and stereotypes. *Shrugs* :) But truth is relative, in my opinion.

    Given that, I COMPLETELY respect your opinion, though. This is just how I consciously chose to write my characters. Thank you for the review! :)

Title: A Fortunate Accident 19 Oct 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Slughorn broke the tender moment. “Yes, well…it looks like the Nobles just skipped that whole part altogether and just oblivated the little scamp.”"- this won the funniest line of the chapter award! *snorts while laughing* I love it when people like him ruin the moment! XD

    And before I go on, I must say that Tonks TOTALLY sounds like my aunt! Seriously, my aunts run around the house screaming before when she was happy. The only difference between the two is that my aunt can't change her hair color as fast as Tonks! XD

    Okay, not I gotta tell you that I REALLY admire Ginny in this chapter. I don't think that I could have admitted I was breastfeeding a baby that wasn't mine to my teachers when they were STILL my teachers. *winces* I would be horrified. So three cheers to her. I would've acted more like Sev and hid and turn red. But Sev sounds just so CUTE! Think Harry and Ginny would let me take him?? Yeah, me neither, but it was worth a shot, right?

    I do have one question though: at the end, what does Ginny mean when she says, "And my name's not Ginny."?? That confused me, but maybe I'm just being stupid (which happens A LOT!) But your answer last review was exactly what I was looking for. I guess I never noticed that Dumbles never just the word "horcrux" around Snape. I guess I just assumed he knew what it was being a Dark Arts Extraordinaire. Very observant of you! ^-^

    Well, I'm off to the next chappie! Tally HOOoooooOOoooOOoooo...!!

    Author's Response:

    Lol! Well...once again, thank you for the review. :) Your aunt sounds super-cool! :D To be completely honest, the whole breastfeeding thing with Ginny got me nervous when I posted it because I figured people would have mixed feelings to it and everything. And they did, actually. But I kept it in there because it's my story and I wanted it in there, AND I wanted to show that Ginny was getting just as attached to Sev as Harry was. Plus, I think the whole idea of breastfeeding is just beautiful. The bond between mother and child is just as precious as the bond between father and child. I wanted Sev to have the whole nine yards now that he was in his second childhood. And eventually Sev will recognize that both Harry and Ginny are strong in their own ways. Um...yeah. I don't know. I'm really glad that you (and a few other reviewers) recognized that the whole breastfeeding thing was something worthy of admiration. That was what I was going for when it came to that. And...yeah. :P Thanks for your opinion on that aspect! :D

    In answer to your question, Ginny was replying to Harry insisting that he wasn't getting worked up. So...Dean is Ginny's ex, Ginny is Harry's girlfriend, and Ginny is going to be staying in the dorms next school year--away from Harry (her boyfriend), and closer to Dean (her ex). Harry was definitely getting worked up in regards to that situation. Lol! :P "And my name's not Ginny." was just her sarcastic reply to him insisting he wasn't getting worked up. It's kind of like, "SURE you weren't getting worked up! SURE you weren't!" Lol! :P Did that clear things up? :) Let me know.

    Thanks again for the wonderful review! :) 

Title: A Fortunate Accident 23 Sep 2009 10:38 am
Reviewer: Daisy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I haven't reviewed this before & I feel very guilty. I think it's fantastic. Thank you.
Title: A Fortunate Accident 23 Sep 2009 9:50 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    XD sadly I cannot since I didn't watch the movie >_> yes shame on me! *dies*
    Can't wait to learn the lesson :D
Title: A Fortunate Accident 23 Sep 2009 4:27 am
Reviewer: HPFan10 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story! Keep up the good work.
Title: A Fortunate Accident 22 Sep 2009 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I am so enjoying this story that I get excited just receiving the update notice. Thanks again!

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