Okay *sniff* That was really, really, touchingly sad! *sniff* I literally had tears in my eyes at Sev's confession! If I were the type to cry, I would have!! Oh, that just got to me! Which means you did a VERY nice job with it! But then you ended on the light, "oh yeah! It was the highlight of his day." and I almost choked trying not to laugh. That was great! XD
There was so much good stuff in this, I'm just oozing with pleasure right now! I only wish I could read more tonight. *sigh* But I need to work and go to sleep. I shall see you on the 'morrow!
| Title: If You Love Me, Let Me Go
| 02 Oct 2009 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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They all need to meet each other next chapter, and sev needs to get over it. Loved this chapter, can't wait for next one.
| Title: If You Love Me, Let Me Go
| 01 Oct 2009 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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To anyone that objects to the swats. Don't forget it couldn't be much of in the way of spanking. After all Sev is 5 months old in body, the diaper was left on and so were the pants/jeans. So his neither cheeks were well padded.
I do hate giving reviews sometimes due to the security code telling me it doesn't match (yeah this will be another retry)
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear about that. That is SO annoying! I think they make you give the security code to make sure it isn't a computer that's entering the stuff automatically. Apparently, there are computers that do that, so it's a preventive measure. It still makes it quite annoying, though. I understand. :-) Thank you for all your reviews! They're wonderful!
| Title: If You Love Me, Let Me Go
| 01 Oct 2009 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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Aww poor Sev. It was deserved though. I like how Sev was able to understand his actions from the past a bit better.
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