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Title: Clarity 20 Oct 2011 8:56 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    rons really gonna have to get over this!
Title: Clarity 20 Oct 2009 7:50 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Sirius and Ron are taking this better than I thought they would. I would have thought they would have argued and bitched lots more. lol But they were pretty...okay, with an outburst here and there. Ha! The beginnig with Sev telling everyone his dad was back was great! XD He even intorduced himself to Hermione like that! XD Way adorable!!!

    And Ron's all for a house, but Hermione doesn't seem to be...knew that's how it would be. And Remus seems to be a fuddyduddy this time. Is it because he's worried about the muggles when he becomes a werewolf? Or is it something else like he doesn't think he should keep taking from Harry? Poor guy, either way makes sense to me.

    And Harry and Ginny are such good parents! They stand by their Sev! XD Very good! He's such a cute little guy!...can be a brat sometimes, but still! Cute!!

    Again, very good Winger. I'm going to have to read tomorrow. I'm REALLY tired tonight. See you on the 'morrow!!

    Author's Response:

    Lol! I'd imagine. I hope that psych assignment went well. :)

    Yeah. :P Sirius and Ron actually have no choice but to take it without too much fuss. Both Ginny and Harry have pointed out on two separate occassions that Sev is to them as Teddy is to Remus and Tonks. Ginny made it clear to them in the car that if they want to keep seeing Harry, they would have to put up with Sev. Otherwise, they would never see Harry again. It was Ginny's ultimatum that got them thinking about how they acted towards Sev. You notice how they're both really quiet in the car. What Harry said to the two of them in the garage was practically the same thing as what Ginny told them in the car. The idea was that if Sev didn't feel safe around Ron and Sirius, Harry was not going to take him to see them; and since Sev goes where Harry goes, if Sev doesn't feel safe around Ron and Sirius, Harry will not be able see them. Thus, Ron and Sirius have to make it so that Sev feels safe around them, thus allowing them to keep seeing Harry. 

    That, and both Harry and Ginny made it clear that insulting Sev in front of either of them is like insulting Teddy in front of Remus and Tonks. They'd have to deal with full-blown pissed off parents if that happens. And that's actually what Ron and Sirius had to deal with in the car in the previous chapter--full-blown pissed off Ginny. They didn't want any further repeats of that performance.  

    Now, that doesn't mean there won't be little outbursts here and there. There will be. There was, actually, as you noted in your review. Yet Harry dealt with those as they came. 

    Oh! And I think you misunderstood the reference. :P Er..."Meh po dad a back!" is a reference to a line from the previous chapter. It means "I'm more important than Black!" :P He was chanting it over and over and over again as a sort of reminder of what Harry said to him in the restaurant: "Yes, you're more important than Black!" 

    "Meh po dad a back!" --> "I'm more important than Black!" 

    Remus is reluctant to take the house because he feels Harry's already done too much for him. He's given him a place to live (Hogwarts), a permanent job (professor), he's making him Wolfsbane every month, he's working to change the laws in his favor, he's stayed with him throughout the years. He feels that Harry has already given so much to him. He's reluctant to take something this big, no matter how good it is. He's a rather proud man. Uh...and yeah. I think that was all.

    I hope the concert went well! :)

    Oh, and did I forget to thank you for the review? How rude of me! THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!! :) It's much appreciated.  

Title: Clarity 11 Oct 2009 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Daisy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hurrah, an update. I loooove this story!

    Mo, Mo as Sev would say
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Title: Clarity 11 Oct 2009 7:58 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great!
Title: Clarity 11 Oct 2009 5:35 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Thanks for the update. I really like it. Sev was so funny repeting that phrase over lol Looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Clarity 11 Oct 2009 4:58 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I love, love, love how Sev is still singing "Meh po dad ah back!" Both the man and the little boy needs to be more important than someone else. And for it to be Black? Even better.

    Smart move on Harry's part to compare Sev and Teddy. Having that image in Ron and Sirius' heads might help them come to terms a little bit easier.

    LOL at Ron being the big brother about his little sister feeding Snape. I can totally see our fave red-headed/hard-headed of the trio not quite making the next step in logic from his sister feeding "a baby" earlier to knowing that the baby was/is Sev.

    I have to admit that I'd be more concerned if he and Sirius were ok with all of these changes. This is far more in character. Good job.

    "Meh po dad ah back! Meh po dad ah back! Meh po dad ah back!" LOL
Title: Clarity 11 Oct 2009 12:52 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    just wonderful!
Title: Clarity 10 Oct 2009 9:40 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    well worth the wait

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