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Title: The Bigger (W)itch 19 Jan 2010 9:01 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was the best chapter yet! I just can't stop smiling. Thank you for that.
Title: The Bigger (W)itch 19 Jan 2010 3:21 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Marvelous!
Title: The Bigger (W)itch 19 Jan 2010 2:58 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved It! If I detailed every wonderful bit, I'm afraid I would end up retyping the whole chapter. From the fireworks at the beginning (So is Siri a bit of a seer?) to the whole Dumbledor issue, to walking with Padfoot to the mystery ending. . . wonderful.

    Warm fuzzies to you for sending them my way nearly every time you post.

    V.
Title: The Bigger (W)itch 19 Jan 2010 2:34 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL chapter, as usual! I just adore this story! It definitly seems like Harry is going to die if he doesn't get this thing done and soon .. and that's why he won't adopt Severus yet. I can't wait to see what's next!
Title: The Bigger (W)itch 19 Jan 2010 12:46 am
Reviewer: Iva (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, the Slytherins are simply not all bad, no matter what Rowling says in her interviews (please, read the books as she wrote them, not her afterstatements), and I find it actually very nice that Snape's students would want to know where he was. Poor thing to be forced to stay with Gryffs only, in my opinion. If things continue this way, he will be Gryff too and I am sorry but I hate the idea.

    This doesn't mean your fic is badly written but I simply enjoy on this kind of fics the part when Snape needs to be changed back again (to an adult) and he finds out that he still can be Slytherin and be proud of it. After all he spent good half of his life as head of that house and it would be terrible for him to feel that all those years were lost.

    Author's Response:

    Hi! Thanks for the review! 

    I just want to clear one thing, though: I don't care what Rowling says in the interviews or in the books. Everyone has a good side and a bad side. I know that. Heck, I LOVE that fact. I know all the Slytherins are not all bad. Hence, I wrote some of the Slytherins as objecting to their housemate's behavior in "Never Tickle a Sleeping Dragon". And that's also why Harry says, in the same chapter, "I'll let the Slytherins sort you out in their own time." The way Harry and Ginny and Sirius and Dumbledore are interpreting the newspaper article, though, is as a warning. There are people looking for Severus, watch out! They're looking at the worse-case scenario (which is what most parents seem to do in instances like this) and interpreting it as the fugitive Death Eaters' version of an APB, or an APW in the UK. After all, if you want to thank a man who's recuperating from a coma, why would you hunt him down like a pack of hungry dogs? Breaking into his quarters and searching his house top to bottom? Why can't you just send him a letter of thanks instead? That'd be the more considerate thing to do. It would be better for him since he won't have to strain himself entertaining guests and such. The lengths at which those people went through are what alarmed Harry and Ginny, and what caused Harry's temper to spike. 

    And I'm sorry to be the one to spoil your enjoyment, but Snape won't be re-aged by the end of the story. This story is a clean restart for him. And the way his character is developing, his prior life (which he tried to get rid of anyway with his suicide attempt) becomes but a cautionary tale at the back of his mind. There will be moments where his old snarky self breaks through, but in many aspects, his suicide attempt succeeded in that it got rid of his old life and gave him a new one. And what exactly is wrong with Gryffindors? They're no different than Slytherins. Or Ravenclaws. Or Hufflepuffs. That whole house-sorting thing just isolates the dominant part of a person's personality (at the moment) and classifies them as a particular kind of person. I, for one, am highly opposed to that sort of stereotyping. What I'm trying to convey is that Sev is growing into this new life and his new personality is developing. It's changed from his old personality which formed when he was with his first set of verbally abusive parents to a different kind of personality which is forming with Harry and Ginny and this whole new life. So, for Sev, all those years were not lost, but rather they were a dream that he could use to steer his life differently this time around.    

    So, in short, thanks so much for the review, I know very well that Slytherins are not all bad, after about the first week, Sev wanted nothing more than to stay with Harry and Ginny, Sev won't be re-aged, and he thinks of his old life more as a cautionary tale, and...oh! Just like there's nothing wrong with Slytherins, so too there's nothing wrong with Gryffindors. :-)

    Once more, thanks for the review!

    Winger 

Title: The Bigger (W)itch 18 Jan 2010 11:38 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was great!

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