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Title: The Thief in the Night 27 Jan 2010 7:28 am
Reviewer: stella008 (Signed) [Report This]
    exactly a week? you promise? Thank you so much for updating this story. My fingers are crossed for a fast update. :)
Title: The Thief in the Night 26 Jan 2010 8:21 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow,what an amazing chapter, and what an obnoxious and annoying healer. I love the way sev and sirius are together now, and love the family environment harry and ginny have created. Havve a great week.
Title: The Thief in the Night 26 Jan 2010 3:18 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great chapter. I'm glad to know Harry will be fine, and the Severus is beginning to see how much he is loved. The healer was actually quite funny, she doesn't have the best bedside manners, but I found her funny. Thanks for the update! I'm very much looking forward to the next, no matter how long the wait, it will be worthy :)Thanks again.
Title: The Thief in the Night 26 Jan 2010 1:53 am
Reviewer: Coconut Rum (Signed) [Report This]
    Lurker here: Your writing style really sets the mood of the wizarding ER. The frantic pace is almost tangible. Nice job.

    I love the healer's remark, "“Spell the po—Where, in Merlin’s name, did you hear that load of rubbish?! ..." Whenever I read about a healer or Madame Pompfrey spelling a potion into a patient's stomach, I wonder, What's up with that?

    The Master Healer really does have an awful bedside manner. I have lots experience as a patient's loved one in the ER of my local hospital (during very serious medical emergencies). All the people who work there -- doctors, nurses, receptionists, lab techs, security guards, etc. -- are usually very sensitive to the family's emotional needs. However, once in a while you do meet one who is a bit rough around the edges. I've only meet one -- and that was the day my husband died of all days. When the shock of his death started to wear off weeks later, one of my first thoughts was, I can't believe that a-hole works in an ER.

    Excellent story.
Title: The Thief in the Night 26 Jan 2010 12:46 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa. I feel like I've been on a roller coaster after this chapter. Very, very good job.

    As for waiting for a week or so? As good as this story is, it's worth the wait.
Title: The Thief in the Night 25 Jan 2010 10:43 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    So ... he's gonna be ok now? YES!!!!! TOTALLY AMAZING CHAPTER!!! That healer is definitly highly annoying too! I suppose I can wait ... but I'm definitly excited to see what's next!
Title: The Thief in the Night 25 Jan 2010 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    are you a master physicist or what? You design the most amazing rollercoasters for us to survive! Up, down, twist, flip, and come in for a landing with a jolt.

    Great chatper.

    V.
Title: The Thief in the Night 25 Jan 2010 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! I liked the chaos of the emergency room--very real!
Title: The Thief in the Night 25 Jan 2010 8:34 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I couldn't really guess what to expect, but this was amazing! (except the healer's attitude of course..)

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