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Title: Mobility and Mobilization 18 Mar 2010 2:52 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update--it was wonderful! Especially the walking lessons! :-)

    V.
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 15 Mar 2010 5:18 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this was soooooooooo good!!!!!!!! I feel so sorry for Harry though, poor thing! This better not mess things up with Sev. They HAVE to be able to adopr Sev. I can not wait for the next chapter!
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 14 Mar 2010 9:59 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent chapter, just one question is there going to be a sequel after this? Please update soon 10/10 Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Hello! 

    Thanks so much for the kind review! :-) In answer to your question, there..."might" be a sequel...or two...after this. ;-P At least, that's what's dancing around in my head right now. I'll ask in the end and see what kind of response I get. Would YOU like to see a sequel after this? :-)

    Thanks again!

    Winger 

Title: Mobility and Mobilization 14 Mar 2010 10:03 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, the way you described teddy learning to walk was so realistic. I love the family together. Take all the time you need, just keep the chapters coming eventually!
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 14 Mar 2010 5:56 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I hope that the truth about his childhood won't damage his chances to adopt Severus. None of what happened was his fault and he shouldn't have to pay for it. Harry was right about one thing; even if he had said something it is doubtful that he would have been allowed to go anywhere, but the Dursley's home. He did ask not to be returned to that household many times, but was always told that for his 'safety' he had to remain with them. That he asked at all should have been telling.

    Go Severus! He is an excellent little teacher, isn't he? I almost feel sorry for what the gnomes will be facing in the future. :D

    Great chapter!
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 14 Mar 2010 12:29 am
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad to see an update! I love this story! Please keep up the good work.
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 14 Mar 2010 12:25 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    glad for a new chapter...will wait for as long as it takes, great story.
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 14 Mar 2010 12:09 am
Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well now, I haven't reviewed in awhile and the first time I did was to ask if this story was abandoned! Sorry about that. I didn't notice the gap the last time because I wasn't able to get on here very often. I am very happy that everything is going so great for you!

    This chapter was wonderful! (just like all the others) I easily fell back into this little world. I didn't even have to reread anything in order to know what was going on. I think, for you, the reviews should simply be a bonus, because you HAVE to know how great this story is. I should think you wouldn't need anyone else to point out how talented you are. :)

    Ok, I'm done sucking up now. LOL Seriously though, this story is one of the best I've read. It has everything I want in it. Great Job!
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 13 Mar 2010 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update! So sad to hear about what Harry had to go through, but I'm sure with the help of his family he will be fine. And I can't get enough of little Sev, he is just so cute :) Can't wait for Christmas, I know it's going to be great. Thanks again!
Title: Mobility and Mobilization 13 Mar 2010 11:00 pm
Reviewer: OctoberRose2011 (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just thinking about this story not even 15 minutes before you updated!!! All I can say is awww, poor Harry! Def. not an easy thing to go through, sexual abuse. And your little Sev...anyways, great job! :)

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