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Reviews For Serendipity
And while they were at it...why not just have the Malfoys take a long, long vacation in Azkaban..? I mean, Harry and his friends have definite proof of Malfoy being a DE...
Back to the climax of New Year's Eve, the only proposal I could think of as more romantic was the one my husband made to me many, many years ago. :) The last scene broke my heart. After the joy of the proposal and the way that Severus finally felt as if he were part of everyone celebrating a new year, new start and new life, being ripped away from his mummy and daddy (and he FINALLY called them that!) was just horrible. Thank Merlin that Harry and Ginny have those mental bonds with him... I just hope that the Malfoys don't have some kind of nasty magic that would block it! Heh, the Slytherin in me is coming out. If the Malfoys are under constant supervision, which might just moderate their reaction to Severus' behavior, Severus can start throwing the mother of all temper tantrums, bring out all the behaviors that he knows isn't tolerated at home with Harry and Ginny, and so forth, and drive the Malfoy's crazy! *grin* Hey, he might even drive Draco to drink publicly! In any case, I know that baby Severus is in good authorial hands and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter when you get it done. I've really enjoyed this story very much and I'm putting it on my favorites! Wonderfully, well done!
This was worth waiting for. Great job!! Congratulations on finals and graduation !!
Oh my word though, you actually made me cry there in the last part of the chapter. Can we all go and hurt Draco and his father? *starts handing baseball bats out to other readers and looks hopeful* I thought that my heart was going to break with Harry and Ginny's when Sev finally called them Mummy and Daddy, what should have been one of their happiest memories is turning into one of their worst. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And congratulations on graduating!! Leilia
P.S: LOVED the chapter, the stuff with the World Trade Center was sad. |
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