| Title: Here, There Be Dragons
| 10 Jun 2010 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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*sighs softly* Dear God. This chapter and the last I was crying over. I haven't cried this much in a story for a long time. But...I love this last chapter. The last chapter was awesome...the way Harry proposed...but this one was even better with that glimpse of the future. Lily, Teddy...everyone. I was somewhat suprised, I must admit, but the fact that the Lady made a visit...but I'm glad she did. LOVE IT!!!!
| Title: Here, There Be Dragons
| 10 Jun 2010 12:48 am
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| Reviewer: ImpatientlyWaiting (Anonymous)
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...for an update! Don't leave us with this cliff hanger!
| Title: Here, There Be Dragons
| 31 May 2010 9:06 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Congratulations for your graduation!! I hope you will enjoy your holidays and whatever career you choose next!
Well, I liked the chapter, but why narcissa quickly changes her mind is bit unclear. And the old magic part is also unclear. I hope you will clear it up in the next chapter..
"Wamp mummy and daddy!" Poor Sev! My heart went out to him. It's a good thing he's got Harry and Ginny in the back of his mind to help him through this. I hope that the Malfoys get what's coming to them. I,m looking forward to see what Sirius is up to. (I'm betting he'll find the muggle priest Harry knew) Awesome chappie!
A wonderful chapter, even though not-wonderful things were happening in Malfoy Manor. I am so glad that Severus remembered the white magic candle inside himself. :)
I loved the vision of what his future would be with Teddy and Lily and Harry and Ginny and all!
And I'm glad to see Astoria and Narcissa finally stand up against Draco and Lucius! I'm very much looking forward to the courtroom drama, and I'm betting that Sirius and Mooney are going to find that priest who was Harry's lifeline in the East End. :)
Congratulations on your graduation! That's a great accomplishment, and I hope that you celebrated appropriately.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and I know it won't disappoint.Well done!
| Title: Here, There Be Dragons
| 23 May 2010 4:30 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Congratulations on your graduation! What a great writer you are, this was such a powerful chapter. Be proud of yourself! Can't wait to read more.
| Title: Here, There Be Dragons
| 23 May 2010 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: Onoclea (Anonymous)
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I'm not one for deaging fics normally, but you have me on tenterhooks, please write more soon!
*squeals* Oh, I was SOOOOOOOOOOO happy to see this!!! Wonderful chapter! Poor Sev, poor Harry, poor Ginny, poor Astoria and ... poor Narcissa! I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, Harry and Ginny HAVE to get him back!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Mazel Tov on your graduation. Please keep updating!!! I can't wait to find out what happens in court!
Draco and Lucius really screwed up this time. They should have known better than to continue on with their 'normal' behavoir in the house when they had an Auror with an all-seeing magical eye with in it. What idiots! Don't they realize that they've just opened themselves up to the raid of the century? xD
I hope that Moody will be able to help Astoria and Narcissa. No one deserves to be treated the way they are being and that Astoria's parents consented to this is disgusting. I hope that she will press charges against THEM for forcing her into this situation. Surely, there is some kind of law that protects children from their parents? (I hope anyways, because she deserves justice.)
Be strong, Severus. Your mummy and daddy will get you out of the grasps of the Malfoys soon. Dobby, Kreacher, and Moody will keep you from harm. Listen to your heart and you will be safe, as Ginny says, let the light within yourself be your night lite and all will be fine.
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