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Reviews For Serendipity
And now Sev can crawl; good for him! But oh, Harry and Ginny are going to have to watch him now!! Who KNOWS what kinda trouble he'll get into later? It will be adorable no doubt, but still! And now Sev sees Lily in the clouds. *sobs* That's so sad! I always feel bad for him because of how much he loved her and didn't get her and...and, yeah...I'm just glad that he's getting a second chance! ^-^ Another goodie Winger! You got a ringer! (I'm hopelessly infatuated with rhyming...sorry about that) XD
And the adult part of Severus is always shocked by something new about Harry, isn't he? He's just so CUTE in this! And *snickers* he likes the milk. *sinckers* that was funny. I really love your writing style. It's great!! Another great chapter Winger-Hawk!!
I can't wait until Sirius comes into the mix. Sev's just going to LOVE that. But now he has Teddy to play with. What's his adult mind think of THAT I wonder? Probably doesn't really care anymore. *giggles* Poor Sev... But seriously, I'm with the Potions MAster in this chapter: bring out the chocolate pudding! lol But I like mash potatoes and corn too. Love it really. I'll read and review later. Again, Very good!! Author's Response: Wow! :D Well...First of all, thank you for all your reviews! I'm more than glad you're enjoying the story! :) And I thank you for pointing out that typo earlier. When I write I tend to type it all really fast and when I'm on a roll I sometimes end up writing 10 pages worth of stuff in a stretch and going back and catching every possible typo is rather difficult for me. So thank you for pointing that out. I'll be sure to fix that the next time I update. :) Anyway, I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story and I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters posted so far. Sirius comes in eventually and that whole fiasco is posted already so you'll be able to see what happens when you get to it. :P Again, I thank you for all your reviews so far, and I really, really appreciate them. ;) Happy reading!
Poor little Sev! His tummy hurt! He's so cute! I love that he laughs at the misfortunes of others! XD Like when they're all shocked and whatnot. But now he's scared and he doesn't like Remua around. :( But yay ice cream!! Now, I don't want to be rude or snotty, but I caught one little typo:"friend of hers at the dorms who was teacher it to her baby brother." the "teacher should be "teaching". Don't worry, I make mistakes ALL the time *winces* I'm pretty bad about it actually. But if you want me to just shut up, then by all means tell me. I'll read tomorrow, but right now I must give in to the powers of sleep. Again, very good!!
OMG!!! This was SOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!! I was "aww"ing and "ooo"ing all through this! I LOVE to read Severus's talk. It's so cute!! XD And OH MY!! When he tries to say big words like "violently" and "disrespect" AWWWWW!! XD He's such a little brat, but I'm loving him!!!! This is so wonderful, Winger-Hawk!! I give you fifty thousand points for this story so far!! (I'm sure I won't have to deduct ;D ) I'm off to the next chappie!!
I love your take on how the books probably SHOULD have ended...without the de-aging part maybe... but the Snape wanting it all to end is very believable. I mean, first he lived and focused on Lily, then he focused on saving Lily, and then when she died he focused on protecting the only part of Lily left in the world: Harry. So naturally when the threat was gone, he'd want everything to be over. Poor man. :( But I LOVE Harry in this. Very good. Mad at Dumbles (the git) and warry of the other professor, and forgiving Snape (^-^) the way it all should be! This is just great! I'm only sorry I didn't start reading before! I'm off to the next chappie!
OH, have you noticed how many reviews you have?! DAMN I usually don't read WIPs'. If I happened to stumble upon this story right now, I would read it simply because of how many reviews you have. You should pat yourself on the back for that alone. Another thing, I want to kick Ginny to the curb. NOT because I don't like her, I'm simply jealous and want to take her place. I do believe you have portrayed the perfect man in Harry. I am totally in love with him. *sighs* I wouldn't be able to live with myself if you offed Ginny though because she's perfect for him. UGH its sickening really: The perfect couple, the perfect baby for them. If you wrote this any better, I would have to vomit!! lol keep it up babe!!! |
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