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Title: Confrontations 09 Oct 2009 12:52 am
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Ick. I'm sorry for the tests and homework. I feel your pain, especially since I really need to be working on mine, but we won't discuss that will we? ;-}

    On to the review:
    I love this story!!
    This is my first Deaged!Sev story that I have read, I have read a ton of Deaged!Harry and Deaged!Draco stories, bot this is the first Sev story. And I have to say that I absolutely love it!
    I really like your take on how Sev's mind works now, how he has all of his memories, but none of the "learned behaviors". How did you come up with that? It is brilliant.

    Also, I loved how Sev nailed Sirius's nose. I can just imagine Sirius leaning in to take a closer look at Sev to see if it is really him, and then, Bam. ;-}

    I also loved that you included one of my favorite stores. IKEA!! And then you had Harry and Ginny have one of my all time favorite foods at IKEA, the meatballs!

    All of that to say, I really love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

    Good luck on your midterms. ;-}
Title: Confrontations 05 Oct 2009 2:25 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL YOU GO GINNY!
Title: Confrontations 04 Oct 2009 8:52 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad things are better. Now they won't have to hide from everyone. The whole thing was really funny! I really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks! Good luck. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Confrontations 04 Oct 2009 6:57 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm doing a happy dance in my chair right now. Very, very well done.

    I realize that the animosity will not fade that quickly, but I really liked the thought of the infant being the bigger man. And obviously so did Sev.
Title: Confrontations 04 Oct 2009 4:02 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this story. Also looking forward to Sev's first bout of magic.
Title: Confrontations 04 Oct 2009 1:02 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    ::falls over laughing:: I love how this is going! And the baby care has been realistic throughout, both the physical and the psychological. Harry's rather a bit OC, but I suppose an intense maturing period could account for that...and I was really annoyed with canon Harry from OotP an onwards, anyways. =}

    I hope this story isn't near ending yet! I want to see who Lily is born as! It would be absolutely *hysterical* if it was Hermione and Ron's future daughter...!!

    Author's Response: Oh, I absolutely AGREE with you! About Harry's characterization, I mean. :P I remember when I started reading the fifth book, all the points where JKR had him screaming in ALL CAPITAL LETTERS-- that really, really got irritating after a while. I just stopped reading. I loved Harry's character from books 1-4. After 5, it just seemed really...off to me. I don't know. This is how I pictured he would mature over the years. To me, everything that happened to him would make him more contemplative; jaded, if you will. He would still be reckless, but he wouldn't be...the way JKR wrote him to be, I guess. I don't know. I really found Harry's character from books 5-7 rather annoying as well. Daniel Radcliffe plays it A LOT better, in my opinion.
Title: Confrontations 03 Oct 2009 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chatper! Good luck with Mid-terms!

    V.
Title: Confrontations 03 Oct 2009 10:54 pm
Reviewer: anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I beyond love this story, i check every day for updates. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Title: Life Has a Sense of Humor 03 Oct 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter lol Can't wait for the next one. Sooner or later this was going to happen. Thanks!
Title: Life Has a Sense of Humor 03 Oct 2009 2:52 am
Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NOOO I hate cliffhangers!! Please don't make me wait all weekend for an update. I'm not above begging :)

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