| Title: Life Has a Sense of Humor
| 03 Oct 2009 1:41 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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Auuugh!!
You stink. No, I mean it. First, you make me want to go to IKEA, and there isn't one closer than about 4 hours away, so that's bad enough. Then, you leave this in such a cliff hanger. What on earth are they going to say to Sirius? He's about as subtle as a brick and I'm not sure he'd be very good at a) not making a scene in public and b) keeping the secret.
Also, Harry and Ginny need to be married already! Yes, I know she wants to graduate first, and my Mom had that requirement of me, but this isn't RL, it's a story, so I want things to go great for characters I like.
I think it's really lovely and selfless what Ginny is doing for little Sev. I like to think I'd be able to do that for an adopted baby.
Write more soon!
Oh my goodness. All the near-misses were quite enjoyable. Well done!
Sounds like trouble brewing for the next chapter though. :-)
| Title: Life Has a Sense of Humor
| 02 Oct 2009 7:15 pm
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| Reviewer: petuniac3 (Anonymous)
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Love it-for some reason I always stop whatever I am doing-work, school papers-just read this lovely story-I hope it is ohhhh sooo long
| Title: If You Love Me, Let Me Go
| 02 Oct 2009 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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They all need to meet each other next chapter, and sev needs to get over it. Loved this chapter, can't wait for next one.
| Title: If You Love Me, Let Me Go
| 01 Oct 2009 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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To anyone that objects to the swats. Don't forget it couldn't be much of in the way of spanking. After all Sev is 5 months old in body, the diaper was left on and so were the pants/jeans. So his neither cheeks were well padded.
I do hate giving reviews sometimes due to the security code telling me it doesn't match (yeah this will be another retry)
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear about that. That is SO annoying! I think they make you give the security code to make sure it isn't a computer that's entering the stuff automatically. Apparently, there are computers that do that, so it's a preventive measure. It still makes it quite annoying, though. I understand. :-) Thank you for all your reviews! They're wonderful!
| Title: If You Love Me, Let Me Go
| 01 Oct 2009 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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Aww poor Sev. It was deserved though. I like how Sev was able to understand his actions from the past a bit better.
| Title: Pouncing
| 01 Oct 2009 4:02 am
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| Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous)
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This is such a sweet story. I enjoyed every chapter. Thanks! Little Sev is just adorable. I'm looking forward to read more.
| Title: Pouncing
| 01 Oct 2009 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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Oh yes babies and bubbles. I am surprised that Sev didn't get a little swat for the kiss ass remark :)
| Title: Pouncing
| 01 Oct 2009 12:17 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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I didn't think I'd like this from the description, but I really got pulled in. It's tricky writing Sev as part baby/part older but you're doing a good job.
Write more soon!
| Title: Pouncing
| 30 Sep 2009 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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Adorable chapter. I like Sevs "Kiss arse" comment lol
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