| Title: Maudlin Moods and Dinner Drama With Silliness on the Side
| 17 Sep 2009 4:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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This is a fabulous story and I hope the next chapter comes quickly!
| Title: Maudlin Moods and Dinner Drama With Silliness on the Side
| 17 Sep 2009 12:00 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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I like this story! Teddybehaves like an older child, though. Eg. Two month old cannot play lying on stomach yet and they sleep much longer. Never mind, though. Mila
Author's Response: Well he doesn't actually play. If anything, it's Sev who babbles and plays. He just enjoys Teddy's company. I had him on his stomach, though, because it's recommended that you switch your baby's position to their tummy every now and then to prevent the development of a flat head at this age. Anyhoo, thanks for the review! :D
| Title: Maudlin Moods and Dinner Drama With Silliness on the Side
| 17 Sep 2009 11:59 am
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| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed)
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:D this chapter was a lot of fun and the convo btwn remus and harry ^_^ interesting the both of them.
| Title: Maudlin Moods and Dinner Drama With Silliness on the Side
| 17 Sep 2009 6:34 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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Oh man can you imagine the diet food that if it had all the nutritional value of good food but tasted like chocolate pudding!! Or gum that tasted like the food you want to cheat with instead of mint,every dieter dream. lol yeah you can tell what I am trying to do :D Oh and lets not forget feather weight charms on baby carriers and diaper bags. Sigh 18 week approx until the little one is here. I wish baby Sev could be here too :p
| Title: Dreamcatcher
| 16 Sep 2009 8:47 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I love Harry and Ginny in this chapter, and love the way harry handled Sev in the last chapter. Who will watch sev when harry teaches and trains?
| Title: Au Contraire
| 16 Sep 2009 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Just found your story and love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Wow, as I was reading it I could picture it and feel the emotion. Amazing job.
| Title: Cub
| 16 Sep 2009 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter. I like how it got all soft and fluffy at the end lol. I did want to complain a bit though. I'll have you know that I burnt dinner last night because of you. :) I actually didn't mind, but my son and hubby did. You see, I was checking on updates, letting my food cook. I noticed you had updated (Chapter 4), and.....well......I kinda forgot about everything else. I was too busy reading you see. I tried to blame you for it, but....uhm....yeah. Didn't go so well. Sorry about that BTW. I think its waiting 24 hours for an update that does it ;) No worries. I can totally handle it. I think. Anyways, this story rocks. See you next chapter!
I am really enjoying this fic. You are doing a wonderful job with it.
| Title: Shopping: Girls Love It, Guys...Not So Much
| 15 Sep 2009 7:02 pm
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| Reviewer: GM (Anonymous)
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OK...interesting chap...though I do have to wonder WHY Sev doesn't like Harry, and himself, sitting besides Remus. But, you'll explain that next chap...so...moving on!
Was it me or did you have Sev giving more into his urges in this chap?
I do wonder, also, why Sev was scared at the beginning. Was it becuase of going out on public? Or specifically becuase Remus was there?
I got to admit, I don't have much to comment about on this chap. I do like the interaction between Tonks and Ginny, and between Remus and Harry.
So, Teddy and Sev are yet to meet officially...though seeing Teddy is only 2 months old, he won't do much with Sev now.
I like how Harry is getting to discover little details about Sev already. Like how Sev will listen to him if he talks certain way, and how Harry knows what Sev wants.
Baby ice-cream. That is GREAT! I love ice-cream and would be very distressed if I couldn't it eat. And I loved that scene of Harry feeding Sev.
Also, Harry calling Sev 'Cub' was very cute! Just like the "little big man". It suits him, and amazingly, Sev doesn't complain about it. Which makes me think, that he did listen to what Harry told him last chap, to just go with the flow.
I read some of the reviews which say that this story will be in the lapse of a year. So, Sev will be a year and a half...hmm...ok, I just hope I can read it all soon! :)
Ok, I hope to read chap 5 soon. So far, I'm loving the story. Though I read this chap while at work, but today it's a holiday, so, I'm eager to read and comment!
See ya!
GM
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