Exciting premise. I like the set-up, and find Harry's searching for a flat oddly exciting. Can't wait to see what happens next!
heh I love his sarcasm, now continue cleaning
This is highly entertaining. I’m enjoying seeing Harry as a young adult looking for a flat. And total sucker punch that he passed up professional quidditch for...well, cleaning.
Wow. I think it's an art on Harry's part to do what he's told, exactly as he told (despite having done it like six times now) and still be able to portray an air of competence and attitude.
I love the idea of Ron working for Snape.
I really like it so far! But... Diagon Alley is two words. Say it like "diagonelly" and you'll end up at Knockturn...
Aw, poor Harry. He's not an apprentice, he's a blood maid!!
I hope tht soon Snape actually teaches him something.
Great story, off to read more!
Wow. Snape is pretty terrible! Poor Harry! What an awful position! I feel sorry for the girl who was supposed to be Snape's real apprentice. She must HATE auror training! Great story so far! Great development!
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