This was a terrific chapter. I’m glad that Snape knows about Harry’s past, and can now treat him with the consideration that he is due.
Oh! How about Harry getting sick and passing out while looking for something. he knocks something over and get's hurt, not deaged, but hurt. Snape feels guilty. There. Enough said. More story!
I Loved this chapter!! :3
I'm so pleased that Snape finally saw the real Harry, and changed his behaviour towards him.
Harry sounded so sweet at that age; poor child. :(
GReat chappie.
THIS IS A PRETTY AWESOME STORY.
Although it looks like you've abandoned it? Alas.
My only criticism is that eight-year-old Harry wasn't nearly as adorable as he could've been. Oh well.
Also, how much does Older Harry remember? Hmm. Perhaps we'll find out...In The Next Chapter.
Hey, I really like this story, are you ever going to finish it?
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| Reviewer: Princess613 (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. I personally don't think the Drusleys abused Harry, but you did the scene well.
Author's Response: In the real books I don't think they did either, but in fan-fiction the story becomes whatever you write it to be, so in this one Harry did get abused unfortunately. That is also the case in most of the stories on P & S... it makes for a more angsty story.
I enjoyed this story and can't wait to find out if Snape will continue to treat Potter nicely or what will transpire. Kind of wish that the deaging potion hadn't worn off so quickly. Anywho can't wait for more wonderful job.
this is really good!! please update whenever you can... can't wait to read what happens next in this!
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