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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: That Which He Needs 28 Mar 2010 10:04 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    that is so sad but kind in a way very good.

    Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review!
Title: That Which He Needs 28 Mar 2010 8:19 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Quite the tear-jerker. Wonderfully-written.

    Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for taking the time to review!
Title: That Which He Needs 31 Jan 2010 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Sophie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sequel? Very good story and it's interesting to see a dramatic scene written with, well I'd call it poise. It doesn't feel awkward or as though it's missing backstory and it honestly does seem that Harry has just reached his limit. Just what I was looking for when I came searching for a scene to show me how to write emotional drama without being tacky.
    9/10

    Author's Response:

    Sorry, no sequel. I wrote this because if I was Harry, I would have thrown things and screamed a lot more than he usually does.

    Thank you for the compliments and thanks for reading!

Title: That Which He Needs 04 Nov 2009 1:31 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. Definitely. xx

    Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reviewing!
Title: That Which He Needs 13 Oct 2009 11:24 am
Reviewer: Little-Starling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely fantastic. You managed to include so much without going into detail, a true sign of a well written story and too of someone who obviously knows the characters. Have you thought of doing a follow-up?

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was a bit worried about the amount of detail (I usually am with whatever I write). About half the reviews I've recieved on this story have asked for a follow-up (talk about boosting my confidence!) but I don't think it's going to happen. I wrote this really because I've read so many stories where Harry turns into a big puddle of goo and it was really ticking me off. I've always seen Harry as using violence as an outlet for his emotions rather than just breaking down. Other than that, I'm really not very good at long stories. Sorry!
Title: That Which He Needs 04 Oct 2009 7:23 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    So sad but a great story. I can see where this could be more than a one shot!

    Author's Response:

    I can see that too. Unfortunately, I'm not sure it will go any further than this! I'm not very good at long stories. :(

    Thank you so much for reviewing! It makes my day!

Title: That Which He Needs 04 Oct 2009 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    This was lovely. The emotional tone was awesome. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: That Which He Needs 29 Sep 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: E (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely brilliant!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!

Title: That Which He Needs 28 Sep 2009 8:23 am
Reviewer: Wildkat2007 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great character study. I loved the way Snape dealt with Harry breaking down. Are you thinking of writing a sequel?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I haven't really thought about elaborating on this, but I everyone's been telling me I should! (Talk about boosting my confidence!) I'll think about it... but I'm not so sure it will happen. I'm not very good at longer stories. :(

    Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Title: That Which He Needs 28 Sep 2009 3:03 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't want that to be the end! (Stamping foot petulantly)

    Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Thanks for the review.

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