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Title: That Which He Needs 27 Sep 2009 11:25 pm
Reviewer: magic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    short but sweet ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: That Which He Needs 27 Sep 2009 11:19 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!! I really, really like!! "Those words are a lie no matter how you emphasize them," is my favorite line - it's at once so Snape and so sympathetic. Really nicely done. :0)

    Author's Response:

    That was my favorite line as well! I'm so glad I managed to capture Snape properly in this. I was a bit worried. Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

Title: That Which He Needs 27 Sep 2009 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was actually quite good. I love how you didn't have to acknowledge that it was Snape there at the end, but through a series of hints, the readers can tell who it is. Nice work.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I was a little bit nervous about doing that at first, but I've read so many fics where the writer underestimates the readers ability to put two and two together that I just had to! I'm glad it worked.

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Title: That Which He Needs 27 Sep 2009 10:49 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    this was so good! we need a longer story from you, you write so well and pull the reader in immediately.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. The sad thing is, I'm not very good at longer stories. :( And the only chaptered fics I'm working on right now are not Snape and Harry. I hope my muse can get her arse in gear and come up with something!
Title: That Which He Needs 27 Sep 2009 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was beautiful. I've got tears prickling at my eyes now; it was THAT real.

    Very nice. I'd love to read more from you Lila. You write beautifully, and I'd even love to see this story elaborated upon. It would be the basis for a beautiful longer story, but even as it is...it is perfect.

    Author's Response:

    Success! As bad as it sounds, I love making people cry. :)

    I haven't really (before now) considered continuing this, but I will think about it. You never know!

Title: That Which He Needs 27 Sep 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    While I am most sad that you killed off Remus, (I love Lupin!) I must say I am very intrigued and interested to see where you will go with this. It's a good start. By all means, continue!

    ~ RK

    Author's Response:

    I know, I know! I was sad to kill off Remus, too! I haven't really thought much about continuing this on past a one-shot, but I will consider it.


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