I really appreciated the deeper dive into Harry’s psyche and the turmoil he’s experiencing. Thanks for another riveting chapter.
Oh my gosh, I really (really, really) love that Harry is jealous of that fifth year!
| Title: Another Glorious Day
| 16 May 2010 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Bewitchedgal (Anonymous)
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The last two chapters have been very intriguing. Just what is bothering James/Harry Potter.
Your writing is very good and the grammar is excellent.
I am eager to read this story and find out what will happen
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I look forward to your continued reviews.
Is Snape Harry's true father??
I think that is what Petunia must have let slip...
| Title: Another Glorious Day
| 08 Nov 2009 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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oh something is seriously wrong with Harry here. :] Poor kid. How long can he go like this? I really like your portrayal of Ron, as short as it was. It was very much in character and with his spirit. Draco was very in character too. The teenage angst Harry is going to is nicely described, especially hating the 5th year Slytherin he didn't know... I liked that Harry just walked away from his detention. Very typical of a teenager acting out like that, I think. Great job.
by the way, your chapter titles are showing up twice at the beginning of every chapter. They are set to show up automatically. You should probably delete the ones you have in your story text.
Oooh, the plot thickens. Poor Harry, he's jealous because "he" wants to be the one to be able to confide and have Snape be there for him, but doesn't understand his own feelings.
Nice chappie, on to the next...
Author's Response: You are psychic, lol.
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