Ron’s great moment - I loved it! Wonderfully done.
Snape! you idiot! Emotional blackmail is not the way to go. Fancy even contemplating that option. He's got some serious backpeddling to do!
I know that Severus just wanted to make sure that Harry can't get hurt like that again, but he shouldn't have tried to force Harry to give up Quidditch. I knew the moment that he approached the subject what was going to happen and he did to. So why did he do it that way? He should have expected the kind of response he got from the ultimatum he didn't deny. He broke Harry's heart.
Usually, I'm not a fan of Ron, but this time I have to stand up and give him a standing ovation. I'm glad that someone took Severus to task for the pain he inflicted upon Harry.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: He did it because he's Severus, and he's currently inexperienced with dealing with the feelings and tantrums of his own child. It is ALWAYS easier to deal with somebody else's kids because you can walk away at the end of the day if things don't work...
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| 05 Mar 2010 7:13 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter and wow, Ron was amazing. He said all the right things to Snape and showed just what a loyal friend is. Snape needs to think about this, you can' t control your kids, they have their own ideas.
| Title: Hot Headed Harry
| 05 Mar 2010 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Well done Ron - the Snapes need a bit of help here.
Oh no!! Poor Harry, and poor Severus.
Doesn't Harry realise that Severus making this request, means the opposite...that he can't bear the thought of losing the son, that he only just found!!
I'm really loving this story. You really delve so deeply into your character's feelings. Nice work.
On to the next chappie.
Brilliant! Absolutely loved this chapter! Go Ron!
Yay Ron! ive never been a huge Ron in fanfics fan but him telling Snape off at the end was just perfect hehe :)
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