This was an emotionally packed chapter. I love that Severus wanted to know about Harry and that Harry was willing to share. Very nicely done.
I’m so glad they connected, even if briefly. Ron has never been a particularly loyal or astute friend, so no surprises there. Thanks for another great chapter!
| Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare
| 28 May 2022 1:35 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Amazing chapter! It was poignant, angsty, moving - everything one could ask for. I can’t believe you wrote those amazing five chapters in one sitting! What brilliance.
This was amazingly angsty. I loved it.
| Title: The Secret That Petunia Kept
| 28 May 2022 1:18 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I really like this version of Draco. He’s mature enough to see Harry’s situation for what it is, and perhaps to see a benefit to camaraderie with his Head of House’s son. Great chapter.
I really appreciated the deeper dive into Harry’s psyche and the turmoil he’s experiencing. Thanks for another riveting chapter.
| Title: James Harry, not Harry James
| 27 May 2022 4:58 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is a wonderfully intense and angsty opening chapter. I love this story.
I love it when I do something as amazing as writing and entire like 5 chapters of a story in one sitting...and then I go and can't even get out three paragraphs bc writers block is a bitch.
| Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare
| 05 Feb 2021 8:12 am
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| Reviewer: Bodo71 (Signed)
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I love this story, wonderful work!
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