Title: Love and Patience
| 05 Mar 2010 12:40 am
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Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Good for Severus taking the initiative. Hopefully they'll gradually get to make the father /son relationship work now. I like your Ginny better than many versions - its easy to see why Harry is attracted to her.
Title: Hot Headed Harry
| 05 Mar 2010 12:29 am
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Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Well done Ron - the Snapes need a bit of help here.
Title: Christmas
| 05 Mar 2010 12:25 am
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Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Lovely chapter - not sure how I missed it before. Nice descriptions, and to see them getting along. Glad it was a good Christmas.
Title: Love and Patience
| 04 Mar 2010 11:11 pm
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Aw, that was so sweet.
I love how you've kept Sev a little domineering, but trying to be a good father to Harry, but not quite knowing how to.
I loved that Ginny and Harry interaction too. Very sweet.
Can't wait to read the next chappie.
Oh no!! Poor Harry, and poor Severus. Doesn't Harry realise that Severus making this request, means the opposite...that he can't bear the thought of losing the son, that he only just found!!
I'm really loving this story. You really delve so deeply into your character's feelings. Nice work.
On to the next chappie.
Awwwww! Wonderful chapter! I'm glad Harry and Severus made up ... Severus had really messed up last chapter! Can't wait to see what's next!
Brilliant! Absolutely loved this chapter! Go Ron!
Yay Ron! ive never been a huge Ron in fanfics fan but him telling Snape off at the end was just perfect hehe :)
Well worth the wait--and you left us with Harry, once again, in the hospital wing!
Great chapter V.
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